聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và lặp lại như "uh" và câu hơi dài, nên cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Bạn cũng nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "coffees" nên là "coffee shops" hoặc "cafes" và câu cuối nên dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho sự thật chung.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially during weekends. We often go out to coffee shops or parks, which gives us a chance to catch up and relax. I find these moments refreshing and important.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "stay connect" nên là "stay connected". Câu "Are funniest things that happen during the day" không rõ nghĩa và sai ngữ pháp, cần sửa lại. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about my work and daily life because these topics are interesting and help us stay connected. For example, I often share funny stories that happen during the day. Talking about these things helps us understand each other better.

建议: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như "an introvert person" nên là "an introverted person" và câu cuối thiếu từ "someone" hoặc "others" sau "with". Bạn nên chú ý dùng giới từ chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: As a matter of fact, I'm an introverted person, so I prefer chatting with just one friend, especially my best friend, because I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts and feelings with her. It's easier to have a deep and meaningful conversation without distractions from a group.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa, ví dụ "Are many children person so before they must communicate" không đúng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy tập trung vào ý chính và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: I prefer to communicate via social media because it allows me to express my thoughts and feelings without feeling shy. Also, I have more time to think before responding, which makes me feel more comfortable and confident.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi nghiêm trọng về ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ "I sometimes agree with my friend when we have a controversial topics" không đúng nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói "disagree". Câu "we easily try to understand each child, appoint few and resolve the equipment peacefully" không rõ nghĩa và sai hoàn toàn. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến rõ ràng, dùng từ đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions on controversial topics. However, we always try to understand each other's point of view and resolve disagreements peacefully.

× we often go out together to coffees or the parks

✓ we often go out together to coffee shops or the parks

The word 'coffees' is incorrectly used as a plural noun here; 'coffee' is uncountable when referring to the drink, and 'coffee shops' is the correct plural form for places. Also, 'the parks' is acceptable if referring to specific parks, but 'parks' without 'the' is more general. The correction uses 'coffee shops' to indicate places to go out to.

× I thought these moments very refreshing and important.

✓ I thought these moments were very refreshing and important.

The sentence lacks the verb 'were' to link the subject 'these moments' with the adjectives 'very refreshing and important.' Without the verb, the sentence is incomplete. Adding 'were' corrects the sentence structure.

× help us stay connect

✓ help us stay connected

The verb 'stay' should be followed by the past participle 'connected' to form the correct adjective phrase. 'Connect' is a verb and incorrect here; 'connected' describes the state of being linked.

× Are funniest things that happen during the day.

✓ They are the funniest things that happen during the day.

The sentence is missing the subject 'They' and the verb 'are' to form a complete sentence. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'funniest' as it is a superlative adjective.

× It's easier to have a deep and meaningful conversation with without distracting from a group.

✓ It's easier to have a deep and meaningful conversation without distractions from a group.

The phrase 'with without distracting from a group' is incorrect and confusing. The preposition 'with' is unnecessary here, and 'distracting' should be a noun 'distractions' to fit the sentence meaning.

× Are many children person so before they must communicate via social media platform like Facebook or messaging apps?

✓ Many children are shy, so they must communicate via social media platforms like Facebook or messaging apps.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Are many children person' is incorrect; it should be 'Many children are shy.' Also, 'before' is misplaced and unnecessary. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Through social media I can fully express my thoughts and feelings without feeling shy and have more time to think before responding and this makes me feel more comfortable and confident.

✓ Through social media, I can fully express my thoughts and feelings without feeling shy and have more time to think before responding, which makes me feel more comfortable and confident.

The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity. Also, 'and this makes me feel' is better connected with 'which makes me feel' to relate the cause and effect properly.

× I sometimes agree with my friend when we have a controversial topics

✓ I sometimes disagree with my friend when we have controversial topics

The phrase 'agree with my friend when we have a controversial topics' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'topics' is plural. Also, logically, people argue when they disagree, not agree. So 'disagree' fits better here.

× we often have different uh opinions

✓ we often have different opinions

The filler 'uh' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity and correctness.

× However, we easily try to understand each child, appoint few and resolve the equipment peacefully.

✓ However, we easily try to understand each other, appoint a few points, and resolve the argument peacefully.

The phrase 'each child' is incorrect; it should be 'each other' to indicate mutual understanding. 'Appoint few' is unclear; likely intended 'point out a few' or 'appoint a few points.' 'Resolve the equipment' is incorrect; it should be 'resolve the argument' or 'disagreement.' The sentence is corrected for meaning and grammar.