聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my feelings.' Also, keep your answer clear and concise.

示例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my feelings when I am stressed.

建议: Focus on clear sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I usually chat with my friend about my future, my mistakes, and family. I especially talk to her about my stress because she understands me well.'

示例: I usually chat with my friend about my future plans, my mistakes, and my family. I especially talk to her about my stress because she understands me well.

建议: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons. For example, 'I prefer to chat with only one friend because I trust her and feel comfortable sharing my problems.'

示例: I prefer to chat with only one friend because I trust her and feel comfortable sharing my problems. We have known each other for about 10 years.

建议: Try to speak clearly and organize your ideas logically. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication, but because we are busy studying, we often use social media to stay in touch.'

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication, but because we are busy studying, we often use social media to stay in touch.

建议: Use clearer sentences and correct grammar. For example, 'Sometimes I argue with friends because people do not always feel good. However, we talk and share our problems to solve them.'

示例: Sometimes I argue with friends because people do not always feel good. However, we talk and share our problems to solve them.

× Yes, I'm like chatting with my friend because when I talk to him or her I feel relaxed and I can relate all my stress and I can do anything else that I want to tell her or him.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friend because when I talk to him or her I feel relaxed and I can release all my stress and I can tell her or him anything else that I want.

The phrase 'I'm like chatting' is incorrect because 'like' as a verb should not be used with 'am' and '-ing' form here. The correct form is 'I like chatting'. Also, 'relate all my stress' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'release' or 'relieve' stress. The sentence structure is adjusted for clarity.

× Yes I always chat to my friend about my future and all my mistake, my father and anything else but I always call her about my stress and anything else because when I said and I said no one no my feeling is just only my best friend.

✓ Yes, I always chat with my friend about my future and all my mistakes, my father, and anything else, but I always call her about my stress and anything else because when I am sad, no one knows my feelings except my best friend.

The verb 'chat' is usually followed by 'with' not 'to'. Also, 'all my mistake' should be plural 'all my mistakes'. The phrase 'when I said and I said no one no my feeling' is unclear and corrected to 'when I am sad, no one knows my feelings'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I always had to my only one friend because I don't like to say a lot of people about my problem or my mistake.

✓ Yes, I always talk to my only one friend because I don't like to tell a lot of people about my problems or my mistakes.

The phrase 'I always had to my only one friend' is incorrect; 'had' is past tense and unnecessary here. The correct verb is 'talk to'. Also, 'say a lot of people' is incorrect; it should be 'tell a lot of people'. Plural forms 'problems' and 'mistakes' are used for correctness.

× I always talk to her because I really trust of her because she is the best of the best friend that I knew her about 10 years ago.

✓ I always talk to her because I really trust her; she is the best friend that I have known for about 10 years.

The phrase 'trust of her' is incorrect; 'trust' does not require 'of'. Also, 'that I knew her' is incorrect; it should be 'that I have known'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× There's a, I really prefer to communicate face to face, but uh, we really busy so we cannot like meeting or anything else because I study and her study too.

✓ I really prefer to communicate face to face, but we are really busy so we cannot meet or do anything else because I study and she studies too.

'There's a' is incomplete and unnecessary. 'We really busy' lacks the verb 'are'. 'Cannot like meeting' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cannot meet'. 'Her study' should be 'she studies' for subject-verb agreement.

× So, uh, when I said, oh, I am, I said I already called her, uh, from messenger, something like that.

✓ So, when I said, oh, I have already called her on Messenger, something like that.

The phrase 'I said I already called her' mixes past and present perfect tenses incorrectly. 'I have already called' is the correct present perfect tense to indicate a completed action relevant to the present. 'From messenger' should be 'on Messenger' as the correct preposition for platforms.

× Yes, sometime because of people around the world is not have good feeling all the time and have a dull feeling like sometimes we have actually too so.

✓ Yes, sometimes because people around the world do not have good feelings all the time and sometimes we also have dull feelings.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'People around the world is not have' is incorrect; it should be 'people do not have' for subject-verb agreement and correct verb form. 'Have a dull feeling like sometimes we have actually too so' is unclear and corrected for clarity.

× But we already talk and sharing about problems so we can make it pretty.

✓ But we already talk and share about problems so we can make things better.

'Talk and sharing' mixes verb forms; both should be in the same form, so 'talk and share'. 'Make it pretty' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'make things better' to express improvement.