聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. For example, say 'I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress and share stories about what we've missed when apart.'

示例: I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress. We often share stories about what happened when we were not together, which makes me feel connected and happy.

建议: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and linking words to make it coherent. Also, provide more specific details about your conversations. For example, say 'We usually chat about our daily experiences and books we are currently reading. For instance, last weekend I had a great dinner at a local restaurant, so we shared our favorite dishes.'

示例: We usually chat about our daily experiences and books we are reading. For example, last weekend I enjoyed a delicious dinner at a local restaurant, so we talked about our favorite foods and restaurants.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by removing filler words and using linking words for coherence. Also, clarify your preference clearly. For example, say 'As an introvert, I prefer chatting with two or three close friends rather than large groups because I feel more comfortable and relaxed.'

示例: As an introvert, I prefer chatting with two or three close friends rather than big groups. This way, I feel more comfortable and can express myself without hesitation.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, add linking words and more specific details to enrich your response. For example, say 'Because I am an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media since it is more comfortable and less stressful than face-to-face conversations. For instance, I often miss phone calls due to anxiety, so I usually send messages instead.'

示例: Because I am an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media since it is more comfortable and less stressful than face-to-face conversations. For example, I often miss phone calls because I feel anxious, so I usually send messages instead.

建议: Your answer has some confusion. Instead of 'I do agree', you might mean 'I do argue'. Also, clarify your points with linking words and specific examples. For example, say 'Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when I think their attitudes are unfair. However, I always express my opinions calmly to help them understand my point of view.'

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when I think their attitudes are unfair. However, I always express my opinions calmly to help them understand my point of view.

× Of course, I love having because it's really my stress whenever I started to chat with my friends and we can share our stories about everything that we missed when we are not together.

✓ Of course, I love chatting because it really relieves my stress whenever I start to chat with my friends and we can share our stories about everything that we missed when we are not together.

The phrase 'I love having' is incomplete and incorrect here; the verb 'love' should be followed by a gerund to indicate the activity enjoyed, so 'love chatting' is correct. Also, 'it's really my stress' is unclear and should be 'it really relieves my stress' to express the intended meaning. Additionally, 'whenever I started' should be in present tense 'whenever I start' to match the habitual action.

× We usually chat about day-to-day experiences and the books we currently reading.

✓ We usually chat about day-to-day experiences and the books we are currently reading.

The phrase 'the books we currently reading' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'we are currently reading' to indicate an ongoing action.

× For instance, I had a great dinner last weekend at a local restaurant so we shared our preferences.

✓ For instance, I had a great dinner last weekend at a local restaurant, so we shared our preferences.

A comma is needed before 'so' to separate the two independent clauses properly. The past tense 'had' and 'shared' are correct here as the events happened in the past.

× I like to chat with two or three close friends rather than, uh, big circles, uh.

✓ I like to chat with two or three close friends rather than big groups.

The phrase 'big circles' is not a common collocation in English for groups of people; 'big groups' is more appropriate. Also, filler words like 'uh' should be omitted in formal speech or writing.

× As an introvert, I prefer social media because it feels more comfortable and less stressful than face to face conversations.

✓ As an introvert, I prefer social media because it feels more comfortable and less stressful than face-to-face conversations.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× For instance, I often miss phone calls because I feel anxious, so I usually send messages instead.

✓ For instance, I often miss phone calls because I feel anxious, so I usually send messages instead.

This sentence is grammatically correct and uses present tense appropriately to describe habitual actions.

× Yes, I do agree with my friends sometimes, especially when I feel their attitudes are unfair and incorrect.

✓ Yes, I sometimes disagree with my friends, especially when I feel their attitudes are unfair and incorrect.

The original sentence 'I do agree with my friends sometimes' contradicts the intended meaning of arguing; 'disagree' is the correct verb to express having different opinions. Also, 'do agree' is unnecessary here and can be replaced with 'sometimes disagree' for clarity.