聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Старайтесь использовать правильные грамматические формы и избегать повторений. Также улучшите связность речи, используя более точные выражения и избегая лишних слов.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I can talk about various topics without stopping. They are very kind and understanding people.

建议: Используйте более точные выражения и правильные формы слов, например, 'work' вместо 'works'. Также старайтесь избегать грамматических ошибок и улучшить связность с помощью союзов.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, work, or hobbies. We often share funny stories and discuss recent movies and music we enjoy. These conversations help me stay connected and relax after a busy day.

建议: Старайтесь строить предложения грамматически правильно и избегать повторений. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и объясните свои предпочтения более ясно.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable that way. Also, since I am an introvert, I find group conversations overwhelming.

建议: Избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов. Формулируйте предложения более чётко и логично, используя связующие слова для плавности речи.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see people's emotions and hear their voice, which makes the conversation more meaningful.

建议: Сократите количество слов-паразитов и улучшите структуру предложения. Используйте более точные слова и выражения для передачи своих мыслей.

示例: I don't usually argue with my friends because I prefer to be kind and maintain peace in our relationships.

× Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because when I chatting with there, I wanna talk about everything I talk talk and I don't stop.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because when I am chatting with them, I want to talk about everything I talk about and I don't stop.

The phrase 'when I chatting' is incorrect because the verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'with there' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'them' for people. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. The repetition 'talk talk' is likely a mistake and should be 'talk about'.

× Uh, they are very kind and understanding peoples people.

✓ Uh, they are very kind and understanding people.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here because 'people' is already plural. Adding 's' is unnecessary and incorrect. The repetition 'peoples people' is also incorrect and should be simplified to 'people'.

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives such as school, works or hobbies.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives such as school, work, or hobbies.

The word 'works' is incorrect in this context; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to employment or tasks, so it should not be pluralized here.

× This conversation helped me as stay connected and relax after a busy day.

✓ This conversation helps me to stay connected and relax after a busy day.

The verb 'helped' is in past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'as stay' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to stay'.

× I think I prefer to chat with only one friend because for me I talk chats with group of people and and comfortable for me and uh also I'm introvert.

✓ I think I prefer to chat with only one friend because for me, chatting with a group of people is not comfortable, and also I'm an introvert.

The phrase 'I talk chats' is incorrect; 'chat' is sufficient. 'Group of people' needs an article 'a'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity. 'I'm introvert' requires the article 'an' before 'introvert'.

× I prefer to communicate it face to face because, uh, when you talk, uh, with people face to face, you, uh, can see their emotions, uh, their laugh, you hear their voice and face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because, when you talk with people face to face, you can see their emotions, their laughter, and you hear their voice and see their face.

The phrase 'communicate it face to face' is incorrect; 'communicate face to face' is correct. 'Their laugh' should be 'their laughter'. Also, 'hear their voice and face' is incorrect; you can hear their voice and see their face.

× I don't think so, uh, because we can uh, quarrel, but I don't want to, uh, I want to be uh, kind and uh, uh, quite with my friends.

✓ I don't think so because we can quarrel, but I don't want to; I want to be kind and quiet with my friends.

The modal verb 'can' is used correctly here. The word 'quite' is incorrect and should be 'quiet'. The sentence is improved by removing filler words and adding proper punctuation.