聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and filler words. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar errors, such as 'one of my friends' instead of 'one of my friend'.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially with one friend named Harman. Whenever I feel sad or angry, I talk to her, and it always helps improve my mood.

建议: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details. Also, correct tense usage and grammar mistakes.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about my daily life and any problems I face. For example, recently I lost my job, and when I told my friend, she encouraged me by saying that things will get better in the future, which really comforted me.

建议: Make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding redundancy and correcting grammar errors. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group because I find one-on-one conversations more personal and meaningful. For instance, I usually talk with my friend Hermer because we understand each other well.

建议: Clarify your preference by structuring your answer better and avoiding awkward phrasing. Use linking words to compare both methods and explain why you like them.

示例: I enjoy communicating both face-to-face and through social media. Since she's my best friend, talking to her in any way helps me relax and improves my mood.

建议: Reduce filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain the situation logically and correct grammar mistakes. Provide more specific details about the argument.

示例: Yes, I do argue with my friend sometimes. For example, recently she told me not to cry and that things would get better, but I felt she didn't understand my feelings, so we disagreed.

× Like one of my friend is Harman.

✓ Like one of my friends is Harman.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun to indicate one member of a group.

× And after talking to her, my mood will be very happy.

✓ And after talking to her, my mood is very happy.

The sentence describes a habitual or general truth, so the present simple tense 'is' is appropriate instead of 'will be' which indicates future.

× Like I remember uh, last day I am very sad due to my job, like I lost my job.

✓ Like I remember, uh, the other day I was very sad due to my job, like I lost my job.

The event happened in the past, so past tense 'was' should be used instead of present tense 'am'. Also, 'last day' is better expressed as 'the other day'.

× And then I talked to my friend, she told me and encouraged me like you will be very happy in the future, so don't be sad.

✓ And then I talked to my friend; she told me and encouraged me, saying you will be very happy in the future, so don't be sad.

The sentence is mostly correct but adding a semicolon and 'saying' clarifies the indirect speech. No plural issue here, so this is a minor structural improvement.

× I always prefer to chat with the only one friend.

✓ I always prefer to chat with only one friend.

The phrase 'the only one friend' is incorrect; 'only one friend' is the correct expression without 'the'.

× Like I previously told you, my friend Hermer, I always talk with her and only she is the my friend.

✓ Like I previously told you, my friend Hermer, I always talk with her and she is my only friend.

The phrase 'only she is the my friend' is incorrect. It should be 'she is my only friend' to correctly use pronouns and articles.

× So I always love to talk with the one personally not in the group.

✓ So I always love to talk to one person personally, not in a group.

The preposition 'to' is used with 'talk' when indicating the person spoken to. Also, 'the one' is vague; 'one person' is clearer.

× I prefer both to communicate with the face to face on social media because I told you like she's my best friend.

✓ I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media because, as I told you, she's my best friend.

The phrase 'to communicate with the face to face on social media' is incorrect. It should be 'face-to-face communication and social media'. Also, 'like' is better replaced with 'as' in this context.

× It's didn't mind like face to face or social media because she always relaxed my mind and my mood.

✓ It doesn't matter whether face-to-face or social media because she always relaxes my mind and my mood.

'It's didn't mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'It doesn't matter'. Also, verb agreement requires 'relaxes' for third person singular 'she'.

× Yes, of course I argue with my friend like uh, I remember that uh last day, uh, she told me like uh, you don't pick cry, don't cry now you will be best good in the future.

✓ Yes, of course I argue with my friend. Like, I remember that the other day, she told me, 'Don't cry, you will be very good in the future.'

The sentence mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. 'Last day' should be 'the other day'. The phrase 'you don't pick cry' is incorrect and omitted. Direct speech is better quoted properly.

× But I'm always telling her no, you are not understanding me.

✓ But I always tell her, 'No, you do not understand me.'

The phrase 'I'm always telling' is awkward; 'I always tell' is better. Also, 'you are not understanding me' is better expressed as 'you do not understand me' in this context.