聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言有些重复和不够流畅。建议减少重复表达，使用更自然的句式，并且注意语法准确性。

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends very much. Whenever I feel down, talking to them makes me feel supported and more comfortable. Moreover, our conversations help me learn new things and see different perspectives.

建议: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: We usually talk about our daily lives, such as school or family matters. Sharing interesting stories helps us laugh together or comfort each other, which strengthens our friendship.

建议: 回答中有较多重复和不完整的句子，建议练习简洁表达，避免重复，并且完整表达观点。

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to better understand their feelings and thoughts, making the conversation more meaningful.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且清晰表达对比。

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to notice others' emotions and respond with comfort or laughter, which is harder to do through social media.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误，建议注意单复数和时态，表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I have argued with friends before. I believe arguments are unavoidable, but after resolving them, our friendship becomes stronger and we can avoid similar problems in the future.

× Whenever I feel down, I usually chat with them because it feels it helps me, makes more comfortable and supported.

✓ Whenever I feel down, I usually chat with them because it feels like it helps me, makes me more comfortable and supported.

这里缺少了like来连接it feels和后面的内容，且makes后面缺少主语me，导致句子不完整。应补充like和me，使句子结构完整。

× Whatever is interesting we would share it with with it with other and this can we can laugh together or we can comfort each other.

✓ Whatever is interesting, we would share it with others and this way we can laugh together or comfort each other.

原句中重复使用了with it，且other应为others，且句子结构混乱。应去掉多余的词，改为with others，并调整句子顺序使其通顺。

× This makes us becoming better friends.

✓ This makes us become better friends.

makes后应接动词原形，不能用现在分词becoming，故应改为become。

× From my perspective I think chatting with one friend is better because when I when we when we chat one by one we can better feel the others change on mind or others feelings better.

✓ From my perspective, I think chatting with one friend is better because when we chat one by one, we can better feel the other's change of mind or others' feelings.

句中多次重复when，且the others应为the other's，表示单数所有格，others feelings应加撇号表示复数所有格。

× This can have a better.

✓ This can be better.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语动词be，导致句意不明，应简化为This can be better。

× I prefer communicate face to face because when we when chatting face to face we can obviously feel others change in emotion and we can can comfort or laugh with others.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when chatting face to face, we can obviously feel others' change in emotion and we can comfort or laugh with others.

prefer后应接动词不定式to communicate，others change应为others' change表示所有格，且can重复出现，应去掉一个。

× This is not obvious.

✓ This is not as obvious.

句子缺少比较结构，表达不完整，应加as形成比较级结构。

× Yes, I used to have the experience of arguing with friends.

✓ Yes, I used to have the experience of arguing with friends.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× I think this is an unavoidable problems.

✓ I think this is an unavoidable problem.

unavoidable后应接单数名词problem，因为this指代单数，故problems应改为problem。

× However, when we argued, when we finished arguing and becomes friends again, our friendship will be harder and we can avoid the problems in future.

✓ However, when we argued, when we finished arguing and became friends again, our friendship became stronger and we can avoid the problems in the future.

becomes应改为过去式became以保持时态一致，harder用词不当，应改为stronger表示关系更牢固，in future前应加定冠词the。