聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: សូមព្យាយាមប្រើវាក្យសព្ទ និងរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគដែលធម្មជាតិ និងច្បាស់លាស់ជាងនេះ។ កុំប្រើពាក្យសំរាប់ពន្យារពេល (umm, uh) ជាញឹកញាប់ ហើយព្យាយាមបង្ហាញចម្លើយដោយប្រើប្រយោគមួយឬពីរដែលច្បាស់លាស់។

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we have free time after school. We usually talk about our day and share our experiences. It helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

建议: សូមប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលច្បាស់លាស់ និងរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគដែលមានលក្ខណៈត្រឹមត្រូវ។ កុំប្រើពាក្យសំរាប់ពន្យារពេល និងព្យាយាមបន្ថែមព័ត៌មានលម្អិតជាក់លាក់។

示例: Usually, we chat about our daily experiences, including happy moments and challenges. We also give each other advice and support when needed.

建议: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ និងព្យាយាមបង្ហាញមតិរបស់អ្នកដោយច្បាស់លាស់។ កុំប្រើពាក្យសំរាប់ពន្យារពេល និងព្យាយាមប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ។

示例: I usually prefer chatting with one friend because it is easier to express my feelings clearly. However, sometimes I enjoy group chats for fun and sharing different opinions.

建议: សូមប្រើប្រយោគដែលមានរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធល្អ និងពាក្យដែលច្បាស់លាស់។ កុំប្រើពាក្យសំរាប់ពន្យារពេល និងព្យាយាមបង្ហាញមូលហេតុឬអត្ថប្រយោជន៍ជាក់លាក់។

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my best friends because we can see each other's expressions and share our feelings better. Also, we often go out together after talking.

建议: សូមប្រើប្រយោគដែលច្បាស់លាស់ និងមានរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធល្អ។ ព្យាយាមបង្ហាញចម្លើយដោយផ្តោតលើការឆ្លើយតបដោយផ្ទាល់ និងបន្ថែមព័ត៌មានលម្អិត។

示例: I rarely argue with my best friend because we usually discuss our opinions calmly. When we have disagreements, we talk openly to resolve them and maintain a good mood.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend umm all the time when we have uh, when we free time after uh, we go after we come back home and we talking together, say about our day together and we umm communicate about everything.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friend umm all the time when we have uh, free time after uh, we come back home and we talk together, talk about our day together and we umm communicate about everything.

The verb 'talking' should be in the base form 'talk' after 'we' to maintain correct subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Using 'talking' here is incorrect because it does not follow the auxiliary verb or continuous tense structure.

× Umm, every day when I'm chatting with my friend, we always talking about our day, our day and what happened to us in one day, or about happiness that happened to us or uh, about our sadness and vis umm, they'll advise to each other.

✓ Umm, every day when I'm chatting with my friend, we are always talking about our day, what happened to us in one day, or about happiness that happened to us or uh, about our sadness and vis umm, we advise each other.

The phrase 'we always talking' is incorrect; it should be 'we are always talking' to correctly use the present continuous tense. Also, 'they'll advise to each other' is incorrect; it should be 'we advise each other' because 'advise' does not require the preposition 'to' and the subject should be consistent.

× Umm, every day when I'm chatting with my friend, we always talking about our day, our day and what happened to us in one day, or about happiness that happened to us or uh, about our sadness and vis umm, they'll advise to each other.

✓ Umm, every day when I'm chatting with my friend, we are always talking about our day, what happened to us in one day, or about happiness that happened to us or uh, about our sadness and vis umm, we advise each other.

The phrase 'advise to each other' is incorrect because the verb 'advise' does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'advise each other'.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend umm all the time when we have uh, when we free time after uh, we go after we come back home and we talking together, say about our day together and we umm communicate about everything.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends umm all the time when we have uh, free time after uh, we come back home and we talk together, talk about our day together and we umm communicate about everything.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the question is about chatting with friends in general, implying more than one friend.

× Umm, it's depend on some time I want, I prefer to talk with my, uh, only one friend and sometime a group of chat, but mostly, uh, only, uh, one friend.

✓ Umm, it depends on sometimes I want, I prefer to talk with my, uh, only one friend and sometimes a group chat, but mostly, uh, only, uh, one friend.

The verb 'depend' requires an 's' in the third person singular form 'depends'. Also, 'some time' should be 'sometimes' to correctly express frequency. 'Sometime' is incorrect in this context.

× Umm, it's depend on some time I want, I prefer to talk with my, uh, only one friend and sometime a group of chat, but mostly, uh, only, uh, one friend. We chatting to each other and talking a lot.

✓ Umm, it depends on sometimes I want, I prefer to talk with my, uh, only one friend and sometimes a group chat, but mostly, uh, only, uh, one friend. We chat with each other and talk a lot.

The phrase 'We chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'We chat' to maintain correct subject-verb agreement and tense. Also, 'talking a lot' is acceptable but 'talk a lot' is more natural here.

× And I think that I'm I've can't express my feeling.

✓ And I think that I can't express my feelings.

The phrase 'I'm I've can't' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'I can't'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to refer to emotions in general.

× Umm, sometime it's depend on people, uh, that I chatting with, uh, mostly, uh, with my best day, I want to, uh, talk to them face to face and uh, also we can see each other, uh, express our feeling, talk about what happening and we can go out together after that.

✓ Umm, sometimes it depends on the people I am chatting with, uh, mostly, uh, with my best friend, I want to, uh, talk to them face to face and uh, also we can see each other, uh, express our feelings, talk about what is happening and we can go out together after that.

The phrase 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Depend on people' should be 'depends on the people' for correct article use. 'Best day' should be 'best friend'. 'Express our feeling' should be 'express our feelings'.

× Umm, it, it really, uh, actually, uh, me and uh, and my best friend are really and we away, uh, in good mood together.

✓ Umm, it is really, uh, actually, uh, my best friend and I are really close and we are always, uh, in a good mood together.

The sentence has missing verbs and incorrect pronoun order. 'Me and my best friend' should be 'my best friend and I'. 'Are really and we away' is unclear and likely meant to be 'are really close and we are always'. 'In good mood' should be 'in a good mood'.

× We always discuss about uh, what we want to say and umm, when we have something that not feeling good, we always talk to each other.

✓ We always discuss, uh, what we want to say and, umm, when we have something that does not feel good, we always talk to each other.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'something that not feeling good' should be 'something that does not feel good' for correct verb usage.