聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but has many hesitations and filler words like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to speak more confidently and clearly with fewer pauses. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our daily experiences and plans for the future, which helps us stay connected and support each other.

建议: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions which reduce clarity. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect points. Also, be specific about topics you discuss to enrich your answer.

示例: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily activities, the food we ate, and our plans to go out together. These topics help us share our experiences and make plans.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains many pauses and filler words. Try to reduce these to improve fluency. Also, use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am introverted and feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts in a one-on-one conversation rather than in a group.

建议: Your answer is unclear and confusing due to many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Practice speaking complete sentences without unnecessary pauses.

示例: It depends on the friend. If I have known someone for a long time, I prefer to communicate face-to-face. Otherwise, I usually chat with friends through social media.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to many hesitations and unclear expressions. Try to speak more clearly and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to explain reasons and give specific examples to support your answer.

示例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions on certain topics. However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better.

× I like chatting with friends.

✓ I like chatting with friends.

The sentence is correct. 'Like' is correctly followed by the gerund form 'chatting' to express enjoyment of the activity.

× I chat with them about, uh, what? How about, uh, the deal about what happened in my, uh, daily days and about the future.

✓ I chat with them about, uh, what happened in my daily life and about the future.

The phrase 'daily days' is redundant; 'daily life' is the correct expression. Also, 'the deal about' is unnecessary and awkward here. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.

× So what will be going to do?

✓ So what will we be going to do?

The original sentence is missing the subject 'we' and has an incorrect verb phrase. The correct future tense form is 'will we be going to do' or simply 'are we going to do'.

× Uh, I usually, uh, that I usually that, uh, uh, with my friends about the, umm, uh, what we do, what we do in our daily lives and, uh, what we ate today and, uh, and, and the planning to go outside, uh, and yeah.

✓ Uh, I usually chat with my friends about what we do in our daily lives, what we ate today, and our plans to go outside.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'Planning to go outside' should be 'our plans to go outside' for grammatical correctness. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And uh, I've, uh, I'll share uh, many things to a single, per single friends, yeah.

✓ And uh, I'll share many things with a single friend, yeah.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' because it refers to one person. Also, 'per single friends' is incorrect; 'with a single friend' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× If my friend is umm, the one who had made, uh, longer than I used to uh, talk with uh, her, uh, in face to face.

✓ If my friend is the one I have known longer than I used to talk with her face to face.

The phrase 'had made longer' is incorrect; it should be 'have known longer'. Also, 'in face to face' should be 'face to face' without 'in'. The sentence is corrected for proper tense and preposition use.

× And if I have chat, uh, with one friend in social media, then I don't.

✓ And if I chat with one friend on social media, then I don't.

'Have chat' is incorrect; it should be 'chat'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to social media. The sentence is corrected for verb form and preposition.

× Sometimes, uh, I argue with friends because, uh, friends are not only the one we be will be friendly with them or we'll get some, uh, like discussions on some topic and also, uh, also civil, uh, get angry on some thing to me, like, oh, like that way we'll get our.

✓ Sometimes, I argue with friends because friends are not only the ones we are friendly with; we also have discussions on some topics and sometimes get angry about things, like that way we'll get our points across.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb forms and prepositions. 'Be will be' is incorrect; it should be 'are'. 'Get angry on' should be 'get angry about'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.