聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "chatting with friends" repeated twice and incorrect phrases like "in a daily basis." Try to use simpler and correct expressions.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends and usually do it every day.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words and more specific details. Avoid filler words like "uh" and try to organize your answer logically.

示例: We usually have casual conversations, such as asking about each other's day and making plans to visit new places together.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. Use correct grammar and avoid vague expressions.

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I don't have many friends in my group, so it's easier to have meaningful conversations one-on-one.

建议: Your answer is understandable but the explanation is unclear and awkward. Use clearer reasons and better vocabulary to explain your preference.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for clearer understanding and smoother conversations.

建议: Your answer is short and the explanation is unclear. Try to use more precise vocabulary and explain why arguments happen with examples.

示例: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends when we have different opinions on a topic, which can lead to disagreements.

× I do like chatting with friends and most of the times I chat with friends in a daily basis.

✓ I do like chatting with friends and most of the time I chat with friends on a daily basis.

The phrase 'most of the times' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'most of the time' because 'time' is uncountable here. Also, 'in a daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis' as the correct preposition for this phrase is 'on'.

× Well to be honest I don't have much friends in my group but there are some of them and I only chat with 1 friend.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't have many friends in my group but there are some of them and I only chat with one friend.

The word 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'friends' is countable plural, so 'many' should be used instead. Also, numbers should be written in words in formal contexts, so '1' becomes 'one'.

× I do like chatting with friends and most of the times I chat with friends in a daily basis.

✓ I do like chatting with friends and most of the time I chat with friends on a daily basis.

The phrase 'in a daily basis' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for the phrase 'on a daily basis'.

× I prefer communicating face to face. It is because it gets more fluency and understandable within it.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because it is more fluent and understandable.

The phrase 'within it' is unnecessary and awkward here. Also, 'gets more fluency' is incorrect; 'is more fluent' is the correct adjective form. The sentence is better without 'It is because' and 'within it'.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because sometimes the talk we are talking doesn't match up.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because sometimes the things we are talking about don't match up.

The word 'talk' is uncountable and does not fit well here; 'things' or 'topics' is better to refer to the content of conversation. Also, 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with the plural subject 'things'.