聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中表达了喜欢与朋友聊天的原因，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“express my truly feeling”应为“express my true feelings”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，使用更地道的表达。

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is my quality time. Talking to them helps me express my true feelings and makes me feel relaxed and relieved.

建议: 回答内容有一定逻辑，但时态使用不准确，如“we talked”应为“we talk”。句子结构较为简单，且表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: When we were in junior high school, we usually talked about what to eat or where to play. However, now that we have grown up, we often discuss school work and extracurricular activities.

建议: 回答未完成，表达不完整，且存在语法错误，如“when we a lot of people”应为“when we are with a lot of people”。建议完整回答问题，注意语法和句子完整性。

示例: I think it depends on the situation. When I am with a group of people, I enjoy hearing different perspectives, which makes the conversation more interesting. But when I am with just one friend, we can have deeper and more personal talks.

建议: 回答中有口语填充词“uh”，影响流畅度，且表达不够准确，如“more efficient”应为“more effectively”。建议减少口语填充词，使用准确表达，句子更简洁。

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps improve our relationships more effectively than social media. We can see each other's expressions and understand their feelings better.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“arguing about what I have done for the trouble”应为“argue about the trouble I caused”，且句子结构混乱。建议理清句子结构，使用正确语法，表达更清晰。

示例: Yes, when I get into trouble, I usually talk to my friends about it. They always give me good advice instead of blaming me.

× I always enjoy chatting with them to express my truly feeling and that makes me very relaxed and relieved.

✓ I always enjoy chatting with them to express my true feelings and that makes me very relaxed and relieved.

这里的形容词 'truly' 应该用形容词 'true' 来修饰名词 'feelings'，而且 'feeling' 应该用复数形式 'feelings'，因为表达的是多种感受。

× When we're in junior high school, the most common talking topic is about what to eat or where to play.

✓ When we were in junior high school, the most common talking topic was about what to eat or where to play.

句子描述过去的情况，动词时态应使用过去时 'were' 和 'was'，而不是现在时 'are' 和 'is'。

× But by the time we grow up now, we talked about the school work or some extra curriculum more.

✓ But now that we have grown up, we talk more about school work or some extracurricular activities.

这里涉及时间状语 'now'，应使用现在完成时 'have grown up' 表示从过去到现在的变化，动词 'talk' 应用现在时，'extra curriculum' 应改为复数形式 'extracurricular activities'。

× When we a lot of people, a group of people, we can talk about anything we like and it is more interesting because we can hear about every person's perspective.

✓ When we are a lot of people, a group of people, we can talk about anything we like and it is more interesting because we can hear about every person's perspective.

句子缺少动词 'are'，导致句子结构不完整。

× But when we are only with some little friend, we can.

✓ But when we are only with a few close friends, we can have more personal conversations.

原句不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，且 'some little friend' 用法不当，应改为 'a few close friends' 表示少数亲密朋友。

× I always chat with my friend uh face to face because I think it can uh improve our relationships more efficient than just use social media to connect with each other.

✓ I always chat with my friends face to face because I think it can improve our relationships more efficiently than just using social media to connect with each other.

'more efficient' 应改为副词形式 'more efficiently' 修饰动词 'improve'，'just use' 应改为动名词形式 'just using'，'friend' 应为复数 'friends'。

× We can see others expression and see what they are feeling by face 2.

✓ We can see others' expressions and see what they are feeling face to face.

'others' expression' 应加所有格 'others''，'face 2' 应改为正确表达 'face to face'。

× Yes, when I get into some trouble I always go to find my friend and arguing about what I have done for the trouble and I'm they always give me some good advice instead of blaming on me.

✓ Yes, when I get into some trouble I always go to find my friend and argue about what I have done for the trouble and they always give me some good advice instead of blaming me.

'arguing' 应改为动词原形 'argue'，'blaming on me' 应改为 'blaming me'，'I'm' 是多余的，应删除。