聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì động từ đúng (ví dụ: 'chatting' nên là 'chat'), tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác hơn như 'electronic devices' thay vì 'electrical device'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends using electronic devices through apps like Messenger or Instagram.

建议: Bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'chatting' nên là 'chat'), câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh câu bị ngắt quãng và dùng liên từ để nối ý, đồng thời cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề trò chuyện.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about my hobbies, like football and video games. Also, I use chatting apps to invite them to hang out or play sports together.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và dùng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'I prefer chatting with a group of friends because we can share stories and get different opinions.'

示例: I prefer chatting in a group of friends because we can share our stories with many people, and they can give their opinions.

建议: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời, tránh câu bị bỏ dở và dùng từ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, 'express my feelings' thay vì 'impress my expression', và 'share my story more easily'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và đầy đủ ý hơn.

示例: I think it depends. Face-to-face communication helps me express my feelings and share stories more easily, but social media helps me stay connected with friends.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ đúng (ví dụ: 'a argument' nên là 'an argument'). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy dùng liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: Yes, I often argue with my friends about football matches because we support rival teams. For example, I support Manchester United, while my friend supports Manchester City.

× I really love to chatting with my friend via the electrical device on the chatting apps like Messenger or Instagram.

✓ I really love chatting with my friends via electronic devices on chatting apps like Messenger or Instagram.

After 'love', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, not 'to' + verb. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context, and 'electrical device' is better expressed as 'electronic devices'.

× Well, I often chatting with my friend about my hobbies such as football or game.

✓ Well, I often chat with my friends about my hobbies such as football or games.

'Often' is an adverb of frequency and should be followed by the base form of the verb 'chat', not 'chatting'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' and 'game' should be plural 'games' to match the context.

× As well as this I also invite.

✓ I also use the chatting apps to invite my friends to hang out and play sports or go out.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be combined with the following sentence to form a complete thought.

× I also use the chatting apps to invite my friend to hang out and play sport or go.

✓ I also use chatting apps to invite my friends to hang out, play sports, or go out.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'Sport' should be plural 'sports'. The phrase 'go' is incomplete and should be 'go out' to make sense.

× Well for me I I more prefer to chatting in a group of friend friends because we can share our stories with the lots of people and they can give their opinions to my story.

✓ Well, for me, I prefer chatting in a group of friends because we can share our stories with lots of people and they can give their opinions on my story.

'Prefer' is followed by the '-ing' form without 'to'. 'Friend friends' is redundant; use 'friends'. 'The lots of people' should be 'lots of people'. 'Give their opinions to' should be 'give their opinions on'.

× Well for me I think it really depends. Like on the one hand when I communicate on person, it will help me to impress my expression and help me to share my story more easy.

✓ Well, for me, I think it really depends. On the one hand, when I communicate in person, it helps me express my feelings and share my story more easily.

'Communicate on person' should be 'communicate in person'. 'Impress my expression' is incorrect; it should be 'express my feelings'. 'More easy' should be 'more easily'.

× However, the social media helped me to stay.

✓ However, social media helps me stay connected.

'Social media' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Helped' is past tense but context suggests present tense 'helps'. 'Stay' needs an object or complement; 'stay connected' is appropriate.

× Yeah, definitely, yes. Like I usually, I, I usually have a argument with my friends about a football matches at about by our favorite football teams.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I usually have an argument with my friends about football matches between our favorite football teams.

'A argument' should be 'an argument' because 'argument' starts with a vowel sound. 'A football matches' is incorrect; 'football matches' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'At about by' is incorrect and should be removed or replaced with 'between'.

× And for example, I love my my United and my friend love my city, their rivals.

✓ For example, I love Manchester United and my friend loves Manchester City, their rivals.

'My my United' is a repetition error. 'My city' is unclear; proper nouns 'Manchester United' and 'Manchester City' should be used. 'Friend love' should be 'friend loves' for subject-verb agreement.