聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng từ vựng chính xác như 'homework' thay vì 'homeworks'.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel excited after a long day. We often talk about our school projects or homework assignments.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'homeworks' và 'to to'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: It depends. If I have homework or school tasks, I usually chat with my friends about our school projects. Otherwise, when I'm bored, I often chat with them to relax.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'something that happy' nên là 'something happy' hoặc 'something funny'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn.

示例: It depends. If I have something funny to share, I prefer chatting with a group because it's more fun. But if I have something personal to say, I prefer talking to my closest friend.

建议: Bạn nên tránh dùng cụm từ thừa như 'than rather than' và làm câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích thêm lý do để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's more convenient than talking face-to-face. Also, I can share exciting things easily through chat.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'not a kind of person that easy to argue with' nên là 'not the kind of person who easily argues'. Hãy làm câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Actually, I'm not the kind of person who argues easily. However, if my friends do something that bothers me, I might argue with them.

× We will chat about our school project or homeworks either.

✓ We usually chat about our school project or homework as well.

The use of 'will' here is incorrect because the speaker is describing a habitual action, not a future event. 'Will' is a modal verb used for future tense, but habitual actions require the simple present tense. Also, 'homeworks' is incorrect as 'homework' is an uncountable noun.

× We will chat about our school project or homeworks either.

✓ We usually chat about our school project or homework as well.

The word 'homeworks' is incorrect because 'homework' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. The quantifier 'either' is also misused here; 'as well' or 'too' would be more appropriate to indicate addition.

× if I have homeworks to do or something I have to do on the school, I will chat with my friends about the school project.

✓ If I have homework to do or something I have to do at school, I will chat with my friends about the school project.

Again, 'homeworks' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable. Also, the preposition 'on the school' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at school' when referring to being present in the school environment.

× if I have homeworks to do or something I have to do on the school, I will chat with my friends about the school project.

✓ If I have homework to do or something I have to do at school, I will chat with my friends about the school project.

The preposition 'on the school' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to indicate location or place is 'at school'.

× If I was bored I often chat with them to to relax.

✓ If I am bored, I often chat with them to relax.

The conditional clause 'If I was bored' should use the present tense 'am' because the sentence talks about a habitual action in the present. Also, there is a repeated word 'to' which should be corrected.

× If I was bored I often chat with them to to relax.

✓ If I am bored, I often chat with them to relax.

The repeated 'to' is a typographical error and should be removed for correct grammar.

× if I have something funny or I want something that happy, I would like to chat with a group because I think that will be fun or if I have personal thing to say I would like to chat with my closest friend.

✓ If I have something funny or I want something happy, I would like to chat with a group because I think that will be fun. If I have a personal thing to say, I would like to chat with my closest friend.

The phrase 'something that happy' is incorrect; 'something happy' is correct. Also, 'personal thing' should be preceded by an article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun.

× if I have something funny or I want something that happy, I would like to chat with a group because I think that will be fun or if I have personal thing to say I would like to chat with my closest friend.

✓ If I have something funny or I want something happy, I would like to chat with a group because I think that will be fun. If I have a personal thing to say, I would like to chat with my closest friend.

The singular countable noun 'personal thing' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I think that I prefer to communicate on social media because I find it more convenient to chat than rather than talking face to face.

✓ I think that I prefer to communicate via social media because I find it more convenient to chat rather than talk face to face.

The preposition 'on' is less appropriate than 'via' when referring to communication through social media. Also, the phrase 'more convenient to chat than rather than talking' is redundant and incorrect; 'rather than talk' is the correct form.

× I think that I prefer to communicate on social media because I find it more convenient to chat than rather than talking face to face.

✓ I think that I prefer to communicate via social media because I find it more convenient to chat rather than talk face to face.

The phrase 'than rather than' is redundant; only one comparative phrase is needed. Also, after 'rather than' the base form of the verb 'talk' should be used, not the gerund 'talking'.

× My friends, if they do something that's hard to me, I will argue them.

✓ If my friends do something that is hard for me, I will argue with them.

The phrase 'hard to me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'hard for me'. Also, 'argue' is an intransitive verb and requires the preposition 'with' before the object, so 'argue them' is incorrect.