聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, you can say: "Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us share our thoughts, learn new things, and relax. Mostly, during weekends, I talk with my friends and listen to funny stories."

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us share our thoughts, learn new things, and relax. Mostly, during weekends, I talk with my friends and listen to funny stories.

建议: Your answer is too short and lacks clarity. Try to respond directly and add specific details using linking words. For example, you can say: "I usually chat with my friends about news and current events. Additionally, we often discuss topics related to social media."

示例: I usually chat with my friends about news and current events. Additionally, we often discuss topics related to social media.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and could be more detailed. Use linking words and correct verb forms. For example: "I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy hearing different opinions, and it helps me make new friends."

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy hearing different opinions, and it helps me make new friends.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to be concise and clear, using linking words. For example: "I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can observe body language and confidence. Therefore, I mostly talk with my friends in person."

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can observe body language and confidence. Therefore, I mostly talk with my friends in person.

建议: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons. For example: "Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions, especially on personal and social matters."

示例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions, especially on personal and social matters.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, it is a wonderful way for share our thoughts and learning new things and helps to relax and unwind.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. It is a wonderful way to share our thoughts, learn new things, and helps us relax and unwind.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence combining multiple ideas without proper punctuation or conjunctions. Also, 'for share' should be 'to share' to correctly express purpose. Separating into two sentences and correcting the infinitive form improves clarity and grammar.

× And mostly in weekends I talking about I talking with my friends and I hearing the funny story.

✓ And mostly on weekends, I talk with my friends and listen to funny stories.

The use of 'I talking' and 'I hearing' is incorrect; the simple present tense 'I talk' and 'I listen' should be used to describe habitual actions. Also, 'in weekends' should be 'on weekends' as the correct preposition for days.

× I usually chat about with my friends for news and current events and I mostly talk social media.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about news and current events, and I mostly talk about social media.

The phrase 'chat about with' is incorrect; 'chat with' and 'chat about' should be used separately. Also, 'talk social media' lacks the preposition 'about' which is necessary to indicate the topic.

× I prefer chatting with the group of people because I enjoying the different opinions and I make a new friends.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy different opinions and make new friends.

'I enjoying' is incorrect; the simple present tense 'I enjoy' should be used after 'because'. Also, 'the group of people' should be 'a group of people' to indicate any group, and 'a new friends' should be 'new friends' as 'friends' is plural.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because this way I see a people body language and confidence and I mostly mostly talk with my friend face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because this way I can see people's body language and confidence, and I mostly talk with my friends face to face.

'a people' is incorrect; 'people's' (possessive) is correct. Also, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context. The repetition of 'mostly' is redundant and removed.

× Sometimes I argue with my friends for his different opinions and disadvantage things like personal and social.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends because of their different opinions and disadvantages in personal and social matters.

'for his different opinions' is incorrect; 'because of their different opinions' is appropriate. Also, 'disadvantage things' is unclear; 'disadvantages in personal and social matters' clarifies the meaning.