聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy, and use more natural phrasing. Also, limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends because we can talk about a variety of topics, such as psychology, politics, and education. These conversations are always interesting and help me learn new perspectives.

建议: Focus on clearer sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific examples to support your answer.

示例: Currently, we often discuss children's education because we enjoy sharing tips and opinions on topics like nutrition and daily schedules. For example, I recently talked about my child's daily routine and how it helps with their development.

建议: Avoid unclear phrases and questions that do not answer the examiner directly. Use clear topic sentences and linking words to explain your preference logically.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to discuss various topics. However, if the group is not interesting, I enjoy talking one-on-one with a close friend instead.

建议: Your answer is good but could be more concise and fluent. Try to avoid filler words and repeat ideas. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions and feelings better. In contrast, social media chats often lack this emotional connection.

建议: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Provide a clear topic sentence and expand with specific examples or reasons using linking words.

示例: I usually avoid arguing with friends because I prefer healthy discussions. For instance, we often talk about interesting topics like maintaining a healthy lifestyle.

× We have lots of themes to chat on.

✓ We have lots of themes to chat about.

The correct preposition to use with 'chat' when referring to topics is 'about', not 'on'. Using 'chat on' is incorrect in this context.

× We can chat on about everything, about psychology, about about politics, about children, education, or somewhat.

✓ We can chat about everything, about psychology, about politics, about children, education, or something.

The phrase 'chat on about' is incorrect; 'chat about' is the proper form. Also, 'about about' is a repetition error, and 'somewhat' is incorrect here; 'something' fits better as a general term.

× we love sharing a new tips or opinions about growing children

✓ we love sharing new tips or opinions about raising children

'A new tips' is incorrect because 'tips' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'growing children' is better expressed as 'raising children' when referring to child-rearing.

× maybe about nutrition of children, scheduling of children's day, for example my child's day.

✓ maybe about children's nutrition, scheduling of a child's day, for example, my child's day.

The phrase 'nutrition of children' is better expressed as 'children's nutrition'. Also, 'scheduling of children's day' is vague; 'a child's day' is clearer. Added commas for clarity.

× Is that an extrovert?

✓ Do you mean an extrovert?

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. To clarify the question, 'Do you mean an extrovert?' is more appropriate.

× I like chatting with lots of people and it depends on the company, I mean on the team.

✓ I like chatting with lots of people and it depends on the company, I mean the team.

The phrase 'depends on the company, I mean on the team' is redundant with 'on'. Removing the second 'on' improves clarity.

× So if it's really enjoyable chatting team so I can chat on every topic but if it's not interesting for me, I can chat with only one.

✓ So if it's a really enjoyable chatting team, I can chat about every topic, but if it's not interesting for me, I can chat with only one person.

Added 'a' before 'really enjoyable chatting team' for correct article usage. 'Chat on every topic' should be 'chat about every topic'. Also, 'chat with only one' is incomplete; 'one person' is clearer.

× I prefer communicating face to face because while you are talking to a person, you can catch the emotion, you can catch the, uh, mental.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because while you are talking to a person, you can catch the emotion, you can catch the mental state.

The phrase 'catch the mental' is incomplete and unclear. 'Mental state' is a clearer and more appropriate expression.

× You can, you can mentally understand the person, but while you chat on social media, you cannot understand what is the person exactly feeling about about this topic.

✓ You can mentally understand the person, but while you chat on social media, you cannot understand exactly how the person feels about this topic.

'Chat on social media' should be 'chat on social media' is acceptable but 'chat on' is less common; 'chat via social media' is better. Also, 'what is the person exactly feeling about about this topic' is awkward and contains repetition; rephrased for clarity.

× I don't like arguing with anybody, but I like discussing some topics about about really interesting healthy lifestyle maybe.

✓ I don't like arguing with anybody, but I like discussing some topics about a really interesting healthy lifestyle, maybe.

Removed repeated 'about'. Added 'a' before 'really interesting healthy lifestyle' for correct article usage. Added comma before 'maybe' for clarity.