聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有語法錯誤，例如 "I always chatting" 應改為 "I always chat"。建議使用正確的時態和主詞動詞一致，並避免重複表達相同意思。可以嘗試用更自然的句子結構來表達你的感受。

示例: Yes, I always chat with my friends before going to bed because it helps me relax and feel comfortable by sharing our daily experiences.

建议: 回答中有語法錯誤，如 "I love to shopping" 應為 "I love shopping"。建議避免使用口語填充詞如 "uh"，並且用更完整且流暢的句子來描述聊天內容。

示例: I usually talk about my daily life, such as what I did at school, and sometimes I share my shopping list because I enjoy shopping.

建议: 回答中有語法錯誤，如 "I prefer chat" 應為 "I prefer to chat"。建議使用連接詞使句子更流暢，並避免重複表達相同意思。

示例: I prefer to chat with only one friend because they know me better and understand me, so I don't feel stressed explaining things to a group.

建议: 回答中有語法和結構問題，且有口語填充詞 "uh"。建議使用更簡潔且正確的句子，並避免重複。

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more comfortable and I can better understand my friends' emotions and expressions.

建议: 回答中有語法錯誤，如 "we always have argue" 應為 "we sometimes argue"。建議使用正確的動詞形式，並用連接詞使句子更通順。

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions, but it helps us understand each other better. I believe discussing is better than conflicting.

× Yes, I always chatting with my friend before I go to bed and it made me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I am always chatting with my friend before I go to bed and it makes me feel relaxed.

The verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'made' should be 'makes' to agree with the present tense context.

× When chatting with my friend and sharing some daily life with them it made me feel comfortable.

✓ When chatting with my friends and sharing some daily life with them, it makes me feel comfortable.

The pronoun 'them' indicates plural, so 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match. Also, 'made' should be 'makes' to agree with present tense.

× I like to share my daily life, uh, for example, what did I do today in school?

✓ I like to share my daily life, uh, for example, what I did today in school.

In indirect speech, the past tense 'did' should be changed to 'did' without 'did' auxiliary verb.

× And I like to share my shopping list with them because I love to shopping.

✓ And I like to share my shopping list with them because I love shopping.

After 'love', the verb should be in the -ing form without 'to'.

× I prefer chat with only one friend because I think the only one friend will know me more and understand me, so I don't need to explain a lot of things to a group of people that make me feel stressful.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think the only one friend will know me more and understand me, so I don't need to explain a lot of things to a group of people that make me feel stressed.

'Prefer' is followed by 'to' plus base verb 'chat'. Also, 'stressful' is an adjective describing something that causes stress; here, the feeling is 'stressed'.

× So I'll choose only one friend.

✓ So I'll choose only one friend.

No grammatical error in this sentence.

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my friend because it is more comfortable for me and I can read more their emotion and their, uh, expression more so that I can know them, know them better than chatting with.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with my friend because it is more comfortable for me and I can read their emotions and expressions better so that I can know them better than chatting online.

The phrase 'read more their emotion and their expression more' is awkward; 'read their emotions and expressions better' is correct. Also, 'chatting with' is incomplete; adding 'online' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friend because we have different opinions about something so we always have argue but it makes me know each other better and it is not the best thing that I think we can discussion rather than conflict.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friend because we have different opinions about something so we always argue but it helps me know each other better and I think discussion is better than conflict.

'Have argue' is incorrect; it should be 'always argue'. 'Makes me know each other better' is awkward; 'helps me know each other better' is better. 'It is not the best thing that I think we can discussion' is incorrect; 'I think discussion is better than conflict' is correct.