聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to keep your answers concise and avoid redundancy. Also, watch your grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity, for example, 'our dream shows what we want to do' is unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. We often talk about our daily routines, work, studies, and future goals. These conversations help us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some confusing phrases, such as 'we also took her to' and repeated 'about our family'. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be specific and avoid vague or incomplete sentences.

示例: When I meet my friends, we usually chat about our dream jobs and daily routines. Additionally, we discuss our vacation plans and share stories about our family members.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to contrast your ideas clearly, such as 'because' and 'however'.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because in a group, there is a higher chance of arguments due to different opinions. However, with one friend, we can have private and meaningful conversations about our lives.

建议: Your answer conveys your preference but contains hesitations and some unclear phrases like 'getting our vision'. Try to use clearer vocabulary such as 'understanding our message'. Also, avoid filler words and improve sentence flow with linking words.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see if the other person understands my message. In contrast, social media conversations can be unclear since we cannot be sure if the other person is paying attention.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. For example, 'start to argue or questioning' can be improved to 'start arguing or questioning me'. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'And I know my friends they are like just talk for five minute'.

示例: No, I usually avoid arguments with my friends by staying calm. If a friend starts arguing or questioning me, I prefer to remain silent to protect our friendship.

× We also like to talk about our vacation plans and our family about our family members.

✓ We also like to talk about our vacation plans and our family members.

The phrase 'our family about our family members' is redundant and incorrectly structured. The correct form is 'our family members' to clearly express the intended meaning.

× because everyone have their different opinion.

✓ because everyone has their different opinion.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× But is uh, if there is only just one friend and me, we can talk about our life and our privacy.

✓ But uh, if there is only just one friend and I, we can talk about our life and our privacy.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the subject of the clause. The correct subject pronoun 'I' should be used when it is part of the subject.

× I really like face to face conversation because with that we can, uh, check if the other person is, uh, getting our vision or no.

✓ I really like face-to-face conversation because with that we can, uh, check if the other person is, uh, getting our vision or not.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. Also, 'or no' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'or not'.

× Uh, but why was social media, we don't know he is he or she is listening to us understanding of what we are saying.

✓ Uh, but with social media, we don't know if he or she is listening to us or understanding what we are saying.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and structure. 'Why was social media' is incorrect; it should be 'with social media'. Also, 'he is he or she is' is redundant; 'if he or she is' is correct. The phrase 'listening to us understanding of what we are saying' is awkward and should be 'listening to us or understanding what we are saying'.

× No, whenever we talk, I prefer to talk calmly.

✓ No, whenever we talk, I prefer to speak calmly.

While 'talk' is not incorrect, 'speak calmly' is more appropriate when referring to the manner of communication. However, this is a stylistic suggestion rather than a strict grammatical error.

× If one of my friends start to argue or questioning, I prefer to stay silent because I don't want to ruin my friendship.

✓ If one of my friends starts to argue or question, I prefer to stay silent because I don't want to ruin my friendship.

The verb 'start' should be 'starts' to agree with the singular subject 'one of my friends'. Also, 'questioning' should be the base verb 'question' to parallel 'argue'.