聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ваш ответ немного длинный и немного запутанный. Постарайтесь говорить более естественно и избегать повторений, а также использовать связующие слова для логичности. Например, можно начать с прямого ответа, затем добавить причину и эффект.

示例: I don't chat with my friends very often because I'm usually busy. However, when I do, I tend to talk a lot because I miss them, which sometimes can be overwhelming for them.

建议: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить более конкретные детали и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи. Также избегайте общих фраз, старайтесь быть более конкретным.

示例: I usually avoid complaining because life has been tough lately. Instead, we focus on positive topics like recent education trends and how our children are progressing in school.

建议: Ответ понятен, но есть ошибки и повторения. Постарайтесь использовать более точные слова и связующие выражения, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и связной.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because large groups can be overwhelming. Also, face-to-face conversations feel more intimate and help me engage better.

建议: Ответ немного запутан и содержит ошибки. Рекомендуется говорить более ясно, использовать связующие слова и избегать тавтологии.

示例: Nowadays, many people rely on social media, but I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and allows better energy exchange.

建议: Ответ хороший, но есть грамматические ошибки и повторения. Используйте более точные выражения и связующие слова для улучшения связности.

示例: We do argue sometimes, but it never turns into a fight. We simply exchange ideas and try to find common solutions to our problems.

× I don't like chatting with my friends, although I don't have so much time for this, so when finally I I'm able to reach my friends, I'm usually talking without even breathing.

✓ I don't like chatting with my friends, although I don't have much time for this, so when I am finally able to reach my friends, I usually talk without even breathing.

The verb 'talking' should be in the simple present tense 'talk' to match the habitual action described. Also, 'so much time' is better expressed as 'much time' in negative sentences.

× That sometimes I think makes my friend a little bit overwhelmed by this, but it's like I feel like thirsty.

✓ Sometimes I think it makes my friends a little bit overwhelmed by this, but I feel like I am thirsty.

The subject 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with the context. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and naturalness.

× Usually I try to keep a positive line of our talk, so we like to discuss our current education trends or how our children succeed and so on.

✓ Usually I try to keep a positive tone in our talk, so we like to discuss current education trends or how our children are succeeding, and so on.

'Line' is replaced with 'tone' for correct collocation. 'Children succeed' is corrected to 'children are succeeding' to use the present continuous tense for ongoing actions.

× I definitely prefer to chat with only one friend because recently I found out myself being overwhelmed by big companies.

✓ I definitely prefer to chat with only one friend because recently I found myself being overwhelmed by big groups.

'Found out myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'found myself'. Also, 'big companies' is likely a mistranslation; 'big groups' fits better in this context.

× So usually I prefer to chart face to face.

✓ So usually I prefer to chat face to face.

The verb 'chart' is a typo and should be 'chat'. No preposition error here, but correction is necessary for meaning.

× It helps me to engage you in conversation more.

✓ It helps me to engage more in conversation.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; the speaker means to say they engage themselves more in conversation.

× So I prefer to keep it simple and natural and conversations face to face.

✓ So I prefer to keep it simple and natural and have conversations face to face.

The sentence lacks a verb before 'conversations'; adding 'have' corrects the sentence structure.

× I find the most natural and energy exchanging process so I would rather have face to face conversation.

✓ I find it the most natural and energy-exchanging process, so I would rather have face-to-face conversations.

'Face to face conversation' should be plural 'conversations' and hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. Also, 'energy exchanging' is better hyphenated as 'energy-exchanging'. The sentence is adjusted for clarity.

× Quite often we can argue about one thing or another, but it doesn't make us doesn't turn into fight.

✓ Quite often we can argue about one thing or another, but it doesn't turn into a fight.

The phrase 'doesn't make us doesn't turn' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'doesn't turn into a fight'.