聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy, for example, instead of saying 'daily to daily problem', say 'daily problems'. Keep your sentences concise and clear.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated about their lives. I usually set aside some time each day to text them and discuss any problems they might be facing.

建议: Avoid excessive filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be more specific and avoid vague phrases like 'adventures that we could just, umm'.

示例: We usually chat about our daily lives, including our shopping plans, eating habits, and mutual friends. Additionally, we discuss upcoming parties and restaurants we plan to visit.

建议: Try to reduce filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as 'perspectives' instead of 'point of views'.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows us to share our perspectives and find solutions to problems together. This way, many opinions come together, making the conversation enjoyable.

建议: Avoid filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly. Also, use more natural expressions such as 'understand their feelings' instead of 'what they think about the communication'.

示例: I usually prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me understand their feelings through facial expressions and body language.

建议: Reduce filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words like 'when' and 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as 'disagree' instead of 'not coinciding'.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when our opinions differ. However, we usually have a small discussion to find common ground and then move on without holding grudges.

× I like chit chatting with friends because I like to discuss daily updates with them and I also like to know what they are doing and what they are, uh, doing in their lives.

✓ I like chatting with friends because I like to discuss daily updates with them and I also like to know what they are doing in their lives.

The phrase 'chit chatting' is informal and redundant here; 'chatting' alone is sufficient and grammatically correct. Using 'chit chatting' is unnecessary and can be considered incorrect in formal speech.

× I usually uh, take out a few uh, time from my daily routine to drop a text to them where I could discuss about their daily to daily problem.

✓ I usually take out a little time from my daily routine to send them a text where I can discuss their daily problems.

The phrase 'take out a few time' is incorrect because 'time' is uncountable and should be quantified with 'a little' instead of 'a few'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. 'Daily to daily problem' is awkward; 'daily problems' is better.

× We usually gossip about, uh, other, uh, about parties, about the restaurants that we are going to go in the upcoming time, about adventures that we could just, umm.

✓ We usually gossip about parties, the restaurants we are going to visit soon, and adventures we might have.

The phrase 'going to go in the upcoming time' is awkward and incorrect. 'Going to visit soon' is clearer. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× I usually prefer to chat with a number of people because that way we can know what's going on in their lives, we can share each other point of views and we can find a solution for any problem anybody is going through.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with a number of people because that way we can know what's going on in their lives, share each other's points of view, and find solutions for any problems anybody is going through.

'Each other point of views' is incorrect; it should be 'each other's points of view' to show possession and correct plural form. Also, 'a solution for any problem' is better as 'solutions for any problems' to match plural context.

× I usually prefer to communicate in person with them because it lets me to know what they are thinking about.

✓ I usually prefer to communicate in person with them because it lets me know what they are thinking.

The phrase 'lets me to know' is incorrect; 'let' is followed directly by the base verb without 'to'. Also, 'thinking about' is redundant here; 'thinking' suffices.

× It lets me, uh, see their facial expressions and what they think about, uh, the communication that we are going through.

✓ It lets me see their facial expressions and what they think about the communication we are having.

The phrase 'the communication that we are going through' is awkward; 'the communication we are having' is clearer and more natural.

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends whenever I think, uh, that my opinion is not coinciding with their opinions.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends whenever I think that my opinion does not coincide with theirs.

The verb 'coincide' is not used with opinions in this way. 'Does not coincide with theirs' is the correct form. Also, 'their opinions' can be replaced with the pronoun 'theirs' for conciseness.

× So you, we usually have a small, uh, discussion where we try to find a common ground for the argument and then we move on.

✓ So, we usually have a small discussion where we try to find common ground in the argument and then move on.

The phrase 'So you, we' is confusing and incorrect; 'So, we' is correct. Also, 'a common ground' should be 'common ground' without 'a' because 'ground' is uncountable here.