聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm not a person who enjoy' nên cần sửa thành 'I am not a person who enjoys'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'or or'. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I don't really enjoy chatting with friends because I prefer face-to-face conversations over typing messages on social media.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'for instant' nên là 'for instance'. Câu trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có thể dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ như 'things' và dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about our hobbies, for instance, playing the violin or reading books, since we all enjoy these activities. Additionally, we often discuss our favorite celebrities and share the latest news about them.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'deeper thought' nên là 'deeper thoughts', 'personal thing' nên là 'personal matters', và 'makes me feels' nên là 'makes me feel'. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to express my deeper thoughts and personal matters, which makes me feel more comfortable and happier.

建议: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về 'face-to-face or via social media' thay vì chỉ nói về 'one friend'. Hãy thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng đa dạng hơn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than via social media because it allows me to express my thoughts and feelings more comfortably. For example, when I talk one-on-one with a close friend, I feel less pressure and can share my ideas honestly.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'Everyone's had their minds' không chính xác, nên là 'Everyone has their own opinions'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

示例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we work on a project together. Since everyone has their own opinions, we need to discuss our ideas carefully to reach an agreement.

× I don't really like chatting with my friends because I'm not a person who enjoy typing and send message or or communicating through social medias.

✓ I don't really like chatting with my friends because I'm not a person who enjoys typing and sending messages or communicating through social media.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in the third person singular form 'enjoys' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. Also, 'send' should be 'sending' to maintain parallel structure with 'typing'. 'Messages' should be plural to match the context, and 'social medias' should be 'social media' as it is an uncountable noun.

× I usually chat with my friends about my hobbies for instant playing the violin or reading books because these things are the things that all of us like.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my hobbies, for instance, playing the violin or reading books because these are things that all of us like.

The phrase 'for instant' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'for instance'. Also, 'the things that all of us like' is redundant; 'these are things that all of us like' is clearer and more natural.

× Sometimes we talk about our favorite celebrities or idols, sharing the latest news or interest story about them.

✓ Sometimes we talk about our favorite celebrities or idols, sharing the latest news or interesting stories about them.

The word 'interest' should be 'interesting' to correctly modify 'story'. Also, 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match 'news' and the context.

× I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to express my deeper thought and my personal thing which makes me feels comfort and happier.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to express my deeper thoughts and my personal matters, which makes me feel comfortable and happier.

'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to match the context. 'Thing' is vague; 'matters' is more appropriate. 'Feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the subject 'makes me'. 'Comfort' should be 'comfortable' as an adjective.

× Everyone's had their minds, so we always have different opinions that the reason why we need to discuss our ideas carefully and to reach an agreement.

✓ Everyone has their own mind, so we always have different opinions; that is the reason why we need to discuss our ideas carefully and reach an agreement.

'Everyone's had' is incorrect; it should be 'Everyone has' for present tense. 'Minds' should be singular 'mind' as 'everyone' is singular. The sentence structure is improved by splitting into two clauses and removing unnecessary 'to' before 'reach'.