聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa chotto nagai desu ne. "Umm" toka "actually" nado no filler ga takusan tsukatte iru node, motto shizen de rikai yasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai. Mata, 5 bun no naka de shitsumon ni chokusetsu kotae, sono ato ni riyuu ya jissai no jirei wo tsukeru to yori yoku narimasu.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, as a university student, I often talk with my dance club friends about hip hop during breaks between classes.

建议: Kotae ga sukoshi fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui tokoro ga arimasu. Motto shizen na eigo de, chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete, setsumei wa rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, "I usually chat about J-Pop idol groups because my friends and I like them. The group has five members who are singers and songwriters." nado to iu katachi desu.

示例: I usually chat about J-Pop idol groups because my friends and I like the same group. It has five members who are singers and songwriters, so we often discuss their songs and performances.

建议: Kotae no bunshou ga sukoshi kurikaeshi ya fukuzatsu na tokoro ga arimasu. Motto seikaku ni chokusetsu kotaete, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai. Rikai wo tasukeru tame ni, "because" nado no linking words wo tsukatte kudasai.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because there are many opinions and perspectives, which makes the conversation more enjoyable.

建议: Kotae wa yoku tsukutte imasu ga, "'cause" ya "umm" nado no filler ga arimasu. Motto shizen na kotoba wo tsukatte, setsumei wo rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Mata, bunshou wa 5 bun ijou ni naranai you ni ki wo tsukete kudasai.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can hear their real voice and see their facial expressions, which helps me understand their emotions better.

建议: Kotae wa sukoshi fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui tokoro ga arimasu. Motto chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete, setsumei wa rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, "Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, usually about class assignments. Recently, we argued about an international language called Lingua Franca." nado to iu katachi desu.

示例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, usually about class assignments. For example, recently we had a discussion about an international language called Lingua Franca.

× I'm university student right now and during my free time between classes I always chat with my friends

✓ I'm a university student right now and during my free time between classes I always chat with my friends

The phrase 'university student' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article causes a grammatical error in English.

× I am my friend. I am one of my friend loves UMM, the same group.

✓ I am with my friend. One of my friends loves UMM, the same group.

The phrase 'one of my friend' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun 'friends'. Also, 'I am my friend' is unclear and likely intended as 'I am with my friend' or similar.

× They are 5, they are 5 members and the name is in Japanese.

✓ There are 5 members and the name is in Japanese.

When referring to the number of members, 'There are 5 members' is correct. 'They are 5' is incorrect because 'they' refers to people or things, but the sentence needs to express existence or quantity.

× I prefer with a lot of friends to just want to one-on-one because if there are a lot of people we can, there are a lot of opinions and there are a lot of perspectives.

✓ I prefer to chat with a lot of friends rather than just one-on-one because if there are many people, we can have a lot of opinions and perspectives.

The phrase 'prefer with a lot of friends to just want to one-on-one' is grammatically incorrect. The correct structure is 'prefer to chat with a lot of friends rather than just one-on-one'. Also, 'a lot of people' is better than 'larger people' in this context.

× So I feel like with larger people the the talk will be more enjoyable. So that's why I prefer with larger people or larger friends.

✓ So I feel like with more people the talk will be more enjoyable. So that's why I prefer to be with more friends.

The phrase 'larger people' is incorrect when referring to number of people; 'more people' is appropriate. Also, 'prefer with larger people' should be 'prefer to be with more friends' for correct preposition and plural usage.

× I really prefer face to face rather than on through social media 'cause I can hear their voice directly and also I can see the other side of the face.

✓ I really prefer face-to-face rather than through social media because I can hear their voice directly and also I can see the other person's face.

The phrase 'rather than on through social media' is incorrect; 'rather than through social media' is correct. Also, 'the other side of the face' is unnatural; 'the other person's face' is appropriate.

× I can see the persons who's talking and I can see the emotion.

✓ I can see the person who's talking and I can see the emotion.

'Persons' is plural but 'who's' (who is) is singular; the correct singular form is 'person'. Also, 'who's' is a contraction of 'who is' and should match singular noun.

× The latest one I guess it was, was my classmates in university.

✓ The latest one, I guess, was with my classmates in university.

The sentence lacks clarity and correct past tense structure. Adding 'with' clarifies the meaning and maintains past tense consistency.