聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Та илүү тодорхой, энгийн бөгөөд байгалийн хариулт өгөх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it feels more comfortable for me as an introvert. I prefer chatting over calling because it allows me to stay within my comfort zone." гэж хэлж болно.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it feels more comfortable for me as an introvert. I prefer chatting over calling because it allows me to stay within my comfort zone.

建议: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, логик холбоотой болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I usually chat with my best friends about our daily experiences and share news that happened during the day using chat applications." гэж хэлж болно.

示例: I usually chat with my best friends about our daily experiences and share news that happened during the day using chat applications.

建议: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, давтагдлыг багасгаж, холбоос үг ашиглах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to get more information and different opinions." гэж хэлж болно.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to get more information and different opinions.

建议: Хариултаа илүү бүтээлч, тодорхой болгох хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "It depends on the situation. For formal meetings like with a teacher, I prefer face-to-face communication. However, for casual chats with friends or family, I find social media easier and more convenient." гэж хэлж болно.

示例: It depends on the situation. For formal meetings like with a teacher, I prefer face-to-face communication. However, for casual chats with friends or family, I find social media easier and more convenient.

建议: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, энгийн хэллэгээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, but rarely. We usually don't argue because we share similar opinions and perspectives." гэж хэлж болно.

示例: Yes, but rarely. We usually don't argue because we share similar opinions and perspectives.

× Yes I'm so chatting person.

✓ Yes, I'm a person who likes chatting.

The phrase 'so chatting person' is incorrect because 'chatting' is a verb form used as a gerund here, and 'so' is an adverb that does not properly modify 'person'. Instead, use 'a person who likes chatting' to correctly describe the preference.

× I would prefer chatting with friends than calling them.

✓ I would prefer chatting with friends to calling them.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two activities, so 'prefer chatting with friends to calling them' is correct.

× Calling with friends.

✓ Calling friends.

The verb 'call' does not require the preposition 'with' when referring to the person being called. 'Calling friends' is correct.

× I think I'm an introvert person so chatting will help me to not go outside from my comfort zone.

✓ I think I'm an introverted person, so chatting helps me not to go outside my comfort zone.

Use 'introverted' as the correct adjective form. Also, 'helps me not to go outside my comfort zone' is a clearer and more natural expression. The phrase 'go outside from' is incorrect; 'go outside' or 'leave' is sufficient.

× I do chat about with my besties about how my days, how my day were, was and what happened to me, what happened to them and we we use chat application for the exchanging the news that happened during the day.

✓ I chat with my besties about how my day was, what happened to me, what happened to them, and we use chat applications to exchange news that happened during the day.

Remove the unnecessary preposition 'about' after 'chat'. Use singular 'day' to match the context. 'Use chat applications to exchange news' is the correct phrase; 'for the exchanging' is incorrect.

× I would rather choose chat with the group than chat with the group of people then only on one friend.

✓ I would rather choose to chat with a group than with only one friend.

The phrase 'choose chat with' is incorrect; it should be 'choose to chat with'. Also, 'than only on one friend' is incorrect; it should be 'than with only one friend'.

× Like chatting with a group of people can give me more information.

✓ Chatting with a group of people can give me more information.

The word 'Like' at the beginning is unnecessary and incorrect here. The sentence should start directly with the subject 'Chatting'.

× If I have to meet the teacher I would prefer to face to face meeting but with my friends or with my family gathering I would prefer social media because it's more easier and it's not.

✓ If I have to meet the teacher, I would prefer a face-to-face meeting, but with my friends or at a family gathering, I would prefer social media because it's easier.

Use 'a face-to-face meeting' as a noun phrase. 'Prefer to face to face meeting' is incorrect. Also, 'with my family gathering' should be 'at a family gathering'. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' suffices.

× Umm yes, but it's a rare we don't have to wouldn't have to argue.

✓ Umm yes, but it's rare; we don't have to argue.

The phrase 'it's a rare' is incorrect; it should be 'it's rare'. Also, 'we don't have to wouldn't have to argue' is confusing and redundant; 'we don't have to argue' is sufficient.

× I don't have to argue with friends because we have all same opinion, same perspective all the time.

✓ I don't have to argue with friends because we all have the same opinion and perspective all the time.

The phrase 'we have all same opinion' is incorrect; it should be 'we all have the same opinion'. Also, 'same perspective all the time' needs 'and' to connect the two nouns properly.