聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and correct grammar mistakes. For example, say "I'm a people person who likes to talk with everyone" instead of "I'm actually a people persons that like to talk with everyone." Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "like to socialize" and "chit chatting" in the same answer. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends during my free time because I'm a people person who likes to talk with others. It helps me relax and relieve stress after a busy day.

建议: Improve clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like "uh." Be more specific about the topics you discuss. For example, instead of "spill the tea," you can say "share gossip or personal stories."

示例: It depends on the friends I chat with. With my close friends, we talk about various topics such as personal stories, current trends, and sometimes gossip.

建议: Avoid filler words like "umm" and incomplete sentences. Use correct grammar such as "different perspectives" and "one person." Make your answer clear and complete within 5 sentences. Use linking words to explain your preference.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can hear different perspectives and opinions. It makes the conversation more interesting and lively compared to talking with just one person.

建议: Use correct grammar and vocabulary, for example, "social media" instead of "social medias." Avoid vague phrases like "many of the effects." Be specific about the benefits and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because technology has improved a lot. For example, we can quickly react to messages and stay connected even when we are far apart.

建议: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be more specific about how you prevent or solve arguments.

示例: It depends on the type of friends, but sometimes we do have arguments. However, I usually try to prevent conflicts by addressing issues quickly and calmly to maintain good relationships.

× I'm actually a people persons that like to talk with everyone.

✓ I'm actually a people person that likes to talk with everyone.

The phrase 'people persons' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and 'person' is singular. The correct singular form is 'people person'. Also, the verb should agree with the singular subject 'person', so 'like' changes to 'likes'.

× I like to socialize with my friends and chit chattings with them.

✓ I like to socialize with my friends and chit-chat with them.

The word 'chit chattings' is incorrect because 'chit-chat' is a noun or verb and does not take an '-ings' form. The correct form is 'chit-chat' as a verb without '-ings'.

× I think it's quite a way to unwind my frat my stresses.

✓ I think it's quite a good way to unwind from my stresses.

The sentence has unclear and incorrect structure. 'Frat' is likely a typo for 'from'. Also, 'quite a way' is incomplete; adding 'good' clarifies the meaning. The phrase 'unwind from my stresses' is the correct expression.

× I think it depends on what type of friends I'm chatting with.

✓ I think it depends on what type of friend I'm chatting with.

The phrase 'type of friends' is incorrect because 'type' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'friend'.

× I think it's quite interesting to chat with a group of persons instead of just talking with one people, one person and additionally like chatting with a.

✓ I think it's quite interesting to chat with a group of people instead of just talking with one person.

The word 'persons' is less common and 'people' is preferred for plural. Also, 'one people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so 'one person' is correct. The sentence ends abruptly and the last part is omitted for clarity.

× Actually, I prefer to communicate via social medias as the advanced technologies as getting improved.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate via social media as advanced technologies are getting improved.

'Social medias' is incorrect; 'social media' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form. Also, 'as the advanced technologies as getting improved' is incorrect; it should be 'as advanced technologies are getting improved'.

× So by chatting via social medias, we can have many of the effects which are beneficial to us.

✓ So by chatting via social media, we can have many effects which are beneficial to us.

'Many of the effects' is incorrect; 'many effects' is the correct quantifier usage. Also, 'social medias' should be 'social media' as it is uncountable.

× For example, we can react a message from our friends.

✓ For example, we can react to a message from our friends.

The verb 'react' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. So, 'react a message' is incorrect; it should be 'react to a message'.

× I think these questions depends on what types of friends and it cannot be denied.

✓ I think this question depends on what types of friends and it cannot be denied.

'These questions depends' is incorrect because 'questions' is plural and 'depends' is singular verb. It should be 'this question depends' to match singular subject and verb agreement.

× It cannot deny that sometimes we have arguments in our daily life with our friends and mostly I will prevent arguments with my friends because I will solve it immediately.

✓ It cannot be denied that sometimes we have arguments in our daily life with our friends and mostly I prevent arguments with my friends because I solve them immediately.

'It cannot deny' is incorrect; the passive form 'It cannot be denied' is correct. Also, 'I will prevent' and 'I will solve' can be better expressed in present simple 'I prevent' and 'I solve' to indicate habitual actions. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to 'arguments' (plural).