聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons or examples.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and solve problems. For instance, whenever I face difficulties, I talk to them, which makes my day better.

建议: Focus on clarity and coherence. Avoid unclear phrases like 'how my devices spent'. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific details.

示例: I usually chat about my daily routine and personal matters. Additionally, I discuss my career plans and experiences at work, such as how I interact with my colleagues.

建议: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I am an introvert. Therefore, I feel more comfortable and relaxed when I talk to familiar people in my close circle.

建议: Make your answer more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Provide clear reasons for your preference.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe facial expressions and gestures, which helps me understand others better. In contrast, I rarely use social media for chatting.

建议: Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to explain your feelings clearly and provide specific reasons.

示例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because it can hurt both of us. If a problem arises, I prefer to stay calm and resolve it peacefully to maintain our good relationship.

× Of course yes, because I love spending time with my friends.

✓ Of course, yes, because I love spending time with my friends.

A comma is needed after 'Of course' to separate the introductory phrase from the rest of the sentence, improving clarity and flow.

× We usually chat often and also my friends love chatting so I prefer chatting with them whenever I get a problem and that is part of my day.

✓ We usually chat often, and also my friends love chatting, so I prefer chatting with them whenever I have a problem, and that is part of my day.

Commas are needed to separate independent clauses and improve sentence clarity. Also, 'get a problem' is corrected to 'have a problem' for natural expression.

× I usually chat about my daily routine and how my devices spent and all the other stuff which are really personal.

✓ I usually chat about my daily routine, how I spend my time, and all the other stuff which is really personal.

'My devices spent' is incorrect; it should be 'how I spend my time' to make sense. Also, 'which are' changed to 'which is' because 'stuff' is singular.

× And I also chat with them about my career and my future goals in about my workplace and how I meet up with my colleagues and.

✓ I also chat with them about my career, my future goals, my workplace, and how I meet up with my colleagues.

The original sentence is incomplete and has redundant prepositions like 'in about'. The corrected sentence is complete and clear.

× I love spending time with my comfort zone in my comfort zone and also with comfortable people.

✓ I love spending time in my comfort zone and also with comfortable people.

The phrase 'with my comfort zone in my comfort zone' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' for 'comfort zone'.

× I rarely use social media to communicate with people and I love communicate with them face to face because when I communicate with them face to face, I see their facial expressions in their gestures and everything that I can see and I can feel whether they are actually mean the things that they are really put out of.

✓ I rarely use social media to communicate with people, and I love communicating with them face to face because when I do, I see their facial expressions, their gestures, and everything. I can see and feel whether they actually mean the things they say.

'Love communicate' should be 'love communicating' (verb + -ing form). The sentence was long and unclear; it was broken down and rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× I would say no because I never argue with my friends and if it is a problem to argue with them I shut down.

✓ I would say no because I never argue with my friends, and if there is a problem, I shut down.

'If it is a problem to argue with them' is awkward; 'if there is a problem' is clearer. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses.

× Usually I do not prefer arguments because that really hurt myself and also my friends.

✓ Usually, I do not prefer arguments because they really hurt me and also my friends.

'That' should be 'they' to refer to 'arguments' (plural). 'Hurt myself' is incorrect; it should be 'hurt me'.

× So then I do not try try to have those kind of things in my life.

✓ So, I do not try to have those kinds of things in my life.

Repeated word 'try try' is a typo. 'Those kind of things' should be 'those kinds of things' to agree in number. Added comma after 'So' for clarity.