聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and filler words. Also, use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. For example, instead of "I love chat with people," say "I love chatting with people." Avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on clear, direct sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to connect with people from all over the world anytime and anywhere. It's interesting to make new friends and learn about different cultures.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. Also, be specific about the topics you discuss and avoid vague phrases like "makeup things" or "any wine."

示例: I usually talk about my daily experiences, fashion tips like makeup and dressing for parties, and sometimes we discuss interesting topics like wine. It's fun to share and learn new things with my friends.

建议: Improve your grammar and sentence structure. Also, clarify your ideas and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your points and be more specific about why you prefer group chats.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to hear different opinions and have a lively conversation. Plus, group chats can happen anywhere, making it convenient and enjoyable.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct grammar. Explain clearly why you prefer one method over the other and provide specific reasons.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's easier and allows me to connect with people from different places. Face-to-face communication is good, but social media offers more opportunities to meet diverse friends.

建议: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid filler words and be more concise while explaining why arguments happen among friends.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. I think it's natural and part of friendship, as it helps us understand each other better.

× And I love chat with people because I think I can, uh, do it anywhere and anytime and I can find any person in any part of the world.

✓ And I love chatting with people because I think I can, uh, do it anywhere and anytime and I can find any person in any part of the world.

The verb 'love' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'love chat' should be corrected to 'love chatting' to be grammatically correct.

× And it's really interesting for me to have many friends in everywhere.

✓ And it's really interesting for me to have many friends everywhere.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'everywhere' because 'everywhere' already implies location. Removing 'in' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually say about my day or listening about day-to-day and talking about makeup things or dressing in a party or any wine and it's really funny to have many friends that could know anything you wanna know and learn about.

✓ I usually talk about my day or listen to day-to-day things and talk about makeup, dressing for a party, or any wine, and it's really fun to have many friends who know anything you want to know and learn about.

The verb 'say' is not used with 'about' in this context; 'talk about' is correct. Also, 'listening about' should be 'listen to'. 'Dressing in a party' should be 'dressing for a party'. 'Funny' is better replaced with 'fun' when describing enjoyment. 'That could know' should be 'who know' to refer to people.

× Chat with a group of people is really interesting because you can listen to many ideas without loud voices and uh, many people around you or have a time for chatting.

✓ Chatting with a group of people is really interesting because you can listen to many ideas without loud voices and, uh, many people around you or have time for chatting.

The sentence needs the gerund 'Chatting' as the subject. Also, 'have a time' should be 'have time' as 'time' is uncountable here.

× Communicate face to face is OK, but communicating to social media is really easier and you can find a different peoples.

✓ Communicating face to face is OK, but communicating via social media is really easier and you can find different people.

The verb 'communicate' should be in gerund form 'Communicating' to act as the subject. The preposition 'to' is incorrect with 'social media'; 'via' or 'through' is correct. 'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'.

× When you find a friend in near of your house or in your hometown you cannot have really difference with her here but when you find a person from another.

✓ When you find a friend near your house or in your hometown, you cannot have much difference with her here, but when you find a person from another place...

The phrase 'in near of' is incorrect; it should be 'near'. 'Really difference' is incorrect; 'much difference' is appropriate. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as far as possible.

× Yes, sometimes I had some argues with them and I think it's part of being friends because we have different opinions about many things and it's really, uh, naturally to have some argue with them and do not be uh, have the same idea about.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have some arguments with them and I think it's part of being friends because we have different opinions about many things and it's really, uh, natural to have some arguments with them and not have the same idea about everything.

The past tense 'had' is incorrect here because the speaker refers to a habitual action; present tense 'have' is correct. 'Argues' should be 'arguments' as a noun. 'Naturally' is an adverb but an adjective 'natural' is needed here. 'Do not be uh, have the same idea' is ungrammatical; it should be 'not have the same idea'.