聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích cụ thể hơn với các chi tiết liên quan. Ví dụ, tránh dùng từ không đúng như 'run improve' và nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time because it helps me relax after a long day at work. Moreover, it strengthens our bond as we share different topics like hobbies, news, and personal experiences.

建议: Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ chính xác. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó dùng liên từ để thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'the what the day was' và dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about how our day went. Sometimes, our conversations last for an hour or even longer because we enjoy sharing our experiences.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ để câu mạch lạc. Tránh dùng từ sai như 'child thing' và 'by happier'.

示例: In my opinion, chatting with a group is more enjoyable than talking with just one friend because they can share different views on a situation and give me useful advice.

建议: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần dùng từ chính xác hơn và câu mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'no worry about how far we are'.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient than face-to-face meetings. We can talk anytime during the day without worrying about the distance between us.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ để câu mạch lạc. Tránh dùng từ sai và cấu trúc câu không đúng.

示例: Actually, we sometimes argue because everyone has their own opinion about different situations. However, we always respect each other's views to maintain our friendship.

× Yes I've enjoyed chatting with my friend in my free time.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time.

The original sentence uses present perfect tense 'I've enjoyed' which is not appropriate for a general habit. The present simple 'I enjoy' is correct for habitual actions. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple friends.

× It help me relax after a work day and also help me to run improve the bonding each other.

✓ It helps me relax after a work day and also helps me improve the bonding with each other.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. Also, 'to run improve' is incorrect; 'improve' alone is sufficient. 'Bonding each other' should be 'bonding with each other' to use the correct preposition.

× We always chat about so many different type such as.

✓ We always chat about many different types such as.

'So many' is informal and incomplete here; 'many' is more appropriate. 'Type' should be plural 'types' to match 'many'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as per grammar rules.

× I spent a lot of time to chat with my friend.

✓ I spend a lot of time chatting with my friends.

The sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'spend' is appropriate instead of past 'spent'. Also, 'to chat' should be 'chatting' after 'spend time'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'.

× Every day we can talk about the what the day was.

✓ Every day we can talk about how the day was.

'The what the day was' is incorrect; 'how the day was' is the correct phrase to describe discussing the day's events.

× This conversation can take a hour for longer if we want.

✓ This conversation can take an hour or longer if we want.

'A hour' is incorrect because 'hour' starts with a vowel sound; it should be 'an hour'. 'For longer' should be 'or longer' to indicate duration.

× In my opinion child thing with a team by happier than chat with one, they can share a lot of view about a a situation and they can give me a lot of advice.

✓ In my opinion, chatting with a team is happier than chatting with one person; they can share a lot of views about a situation and give me a lot of advice.

'Child thing' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting'. 'By happier' should be 'is happier'. 'Chat' should be 'chatting'. 'View' should be plural 'views'. 'A a' is a typo and should be 'a'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I love them very much.

✓ I love them very much.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× In my opinion, social media is more convenient than face to face each other.

✓ In my opinion, social media is more convenient than face-to-face communication.

'Face to face each other' is incorrect; 'face-to-face communication' is the correct phrase. Also, 'face-to-face' should be hyphenated as an adjective.

× With social media we can talk until the day end and no worry about how far we are.

✓ With social media, we can talk until the day ends and not worry about how far we are.

'Until the day end' should be 'until the day ends' to match subject-verb agreement. 'No worry' should be 'not worry' to form the correct negative.

× Actually we argue every day a man boy is that everyone have their own view about any situation.

✓ Actually, we argue every day because everyone has their own view about any situation.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'A man boy is that' is incorrect and removed. 'Everyone have' should be 'everyone has' for subject-verb agreement. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× And another main advice is that we we make a respect for to each other.

✓ And another main point is that we should respect each other.

'Another main advice' is awkward; 'another main point' is better. 'We we make a respect for to each other' is incorrect; 'we should respect each other' is the correct expression.