聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. Instead of 'it feels me happy', say 'it makes me feel happy'. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Keep your answer concise and clear.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

建议: Use correct grammar and more natural phrasing. Instead of 'I'm fascinating towards it', say 'I am fascinated by them'. Also, use simpler and clearer expressions like 'about clothes and new makeup products'.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about clothes and new makeup products because I am fascinated by them.

建议: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Instead of repeating 'with her', say it once. Also, use clearer expressions like 'I feel more comfortable and connected when I talk to one friend because I can share all my feelings with her.'

示例: I prefer talking with one friend because I feel more comfortable and connected, and I can share all my feelings with her.

建议: Use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Instead of 'it is very uncomplicated', say 'it is very convenient'. Also, use plural form 'messages'.

示例: In this modern era, I prefer communicating via social media because it is very convenient and easy to send messages to friends.

建议: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Instead of the confusing sentence, say 'Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when our opinions do not match. I think arguments are important because they help clear doubts.'

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when our opinions differ. I believe arguments are important as they help clear misunderstandings.

× Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it feels me happy and stress free.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it makes me happy and stress free.

The verb 'feels' is incorrectly used with the pronoun 'me'. The correct verb here is 'makes' to express causing a feeling. So, 'it makes me happy' is the correct phrase.

× I usually like to chat with my friends regarding clothes and new makeup products because I'm fascinating towards it.

✓ I usually like to chat with my friends about clothes and new makeup products because I'm fascinated by them.

The preposition 'regarding' is less natural here; 'about' is preferred. Also, 'I'm fascinating towards it' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I'm fascinated by them' to express interest.

× I love to talk with one friend because I feel more comfortable and I feel more related when I talk with with my one friend as I can share all the feelings with her with her.

✓ I love to talk with one friend because I feel more comfortable and more connected when I talk with my one friend as I can share all my feelings with her.

The phrase 'feel more related' is incorrect; 'feel more connected' is appropriate. Also, 'with with' is a repetition error and 'share all the feelings with her with her' repeats 'with her' unnecessarily. These have been corrected.

× Well, in this modern era I love to talk via social media because it is very uncomplicated to talk with friends and it is very easy to convey message.

✓ Well, in this modern era I love to talk through social media because it is very easy to talk with friends and it is very easy to convey messages.

The preposition 'via' is acceptable but 'through' is more natural here. Also, 'uncomplicated' is less common; 'easy' is better. 'Convey message' should be plural 'convey messages' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, definitely I argue with friends when someone the opinions of my friends were not matched match I we had argument and it is more important to have tournament because it cleared doubts in the mind.

✓ Yes, definitely I argue with friends when someone's opinions do not match mine. We have arguments, and it is important to have them because they clear doubts in the mind.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors and incorrect verb forms. 'Someone the opinions of my friends were not matched match I we had argument' is ungrammatical. It is corrected to 'when someone's opinions do not match mine'. 'Tournament' is incorrect; the intended word is 'argument' or 'discussion'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.