聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to focus directly on the question and avoid mixing unrelated topics. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends very much. We often talk about our jobs, travel experiences, and music. I find these conversations interesting because they help me learn new things and stay connected with them.

建议: Your answer includes some unclear phrases and lacks proper linking. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect your points. Be specific and avoid vague expressions.

示例: Usually, I chat with my friends about job opportunities and travel plans. We also talk about movies we want to watch at the cinema. These topics help us stay connected and enjoy our time together.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' correctly. Be clear about your preference and reasons.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can hear different ideas from everyone. Moreover, sharing my own thoughts helps us come up with better suggestions together.

建议: Your answer has some unclear parts and incomplete sentences. Try to express your preference clearly and explain your reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'unlike'. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because I can talk to my friends and family anytime from the comfort of my home. Unlike face-to-face meetings, social media is more convenient when I am busy with work.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to give a direct response and provide a clear example. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid hesitation sounds like 'umm'.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, a few weeks ago, we planned to go to the beach, but one friend suggested a different place, which caused a disagreement.

× Absolutely, I love exploring new friends, travelling and also interacting with my friends when I meet new ones.

✓ Absolutely, I love exploring new friendships, travelling and also interacting with my friends when I meet new ones.

The phrase 'exploring new friends' is incorrect because 'friends' are people, not something to explore. The correct phrase is 'exploring new friendships' or 'making new friends'. Here, 'exploring new friendships' fits better as it refers to developing new relationships.

× I like chatting about job opportunity growth and additionally I love hanging out with my friends, start to maybe have a drink, talk about music because I.

✓ I like chatting about job opportunities growth and additionally I love hanging out with my friends, maybe starting to have a drink, and talking about music because I enjoy it.

The phrase 'job opportunity growth' should be pluralized to 'job opportunities growth' to correctly refer to multiple opportunities. Also, the sentence is incomplete and awkward; adding 'maybe starting to have a drink, and talking about music because I enjoy it' makes it grammatically correct and clearer.

× I love to discuss with my friends about job opportunities, traveling for vacation, then also talking about smoothies and so interesting moving to see in the cinema that's help us stay connected and interacts more when we hang out.

✓ I love to discuss job opportunities, travelling for vacation, and also talking about smoothies and interesting movies to see in the cinema that help us stay connected and interact more when we hang out.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'with' or 'about' when followed by the object. Also, 'traveling' should be 'travelling' (British English). 'So interesting moving' is incorrect; it should be 'interesting movies'. 'That's help' should be 'that help' to agree with plural 'movies'. 'Interacts' should be 'interact' to agree with plural subject.

× Usually love interacting with group of people because when I stay with them I tend to get ideas varieties of ideas from them so and moreover they get my own ideas that help us to ban small and bring different suggestion that we can use to.

✓ I usually love interacting with groups of people because when I stay with them I tend to get a variety of ideas from them, and moreover, they get my own ideas that help us to brainstorm and bring different suggestions that we can use.

The phrase 'group of people' should be pluralized to 'groups of people' to indicate multiple groups. 'Ideas varieties of ideas' is redundant; 'a variety of ideas' is correct. 'Ban small' is incorrect; likely intended 'brainstorm'. 'Suggestion' should be plural 'suggestions' to match context.

× Definitely, I love to interact on social medias so that I will be in the comforts of my home child with my friends and families.

✓ Definitely, I love to interact on social media so that I can be in the comfort of my home chatting with my friends and family.

'Social medias' is incorrect; the correct term is 'social media' (uncountable noun). 'Comforts' should be singular 'comfort'. 'Child' is incorrect here; likely intended 'chatting'. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family collectively.

× That gives me the opportunity at any time to interact with them, unlike when I'm meeting face to face. Maybe my work can disrupt me on.

✓ That gives me the opportunity to interact with them at any time, unlike when I'm meeting face to face, where my work might disrupt me.

The sentence structure is awkward and incomplete. 'At any time' should follow 'opportunity to interact'. 'Meeting face to face' needs 'with them' for clarity. 'Maybe my work can disrupt me on' is incomplete; it should be 'where my work might disrupt me' to complete the thought.

× Well that's a good question. I do umm disagree with my friends when they have probably an idea that does not agree on what you are planning to do.

✓ Well, that's a good question. I do disagree with my friends when they have an idea that does not agree with what I am planning to do.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' to match the speaker's perspective. 'Does not agree on' should be 'does not agree with' as the correct preposition with 'agree' is 'with'.

× So for example we will plan of going to the beach so weeks ago then my friend suggest that.

✓ For example, we planned to go to the beach a few weeks ago, but my friend suggested otherwise.

The phrase 'plan of going' is incorrect; it should be 'planned to go'. 'So weeks ago then' is awkward; 'a few weeks ago' is correct. 'My friend suggest' should be 'my friend suggested' to match past tense. The sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.