聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณดีที่แสดงความชอบและให้ตัวอย่าง แต่ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น คำว่า 'descent' น่าจะเป็น 'distance' และลดความซ้ำซ้อนในประโยคเพื่อความกระชับและชัดเจน

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends online, especially through Instagram DMs, because it helps me stay connected with those who live far away. Regular conversations allow us to maintain close relationships despite the distance. For example, we often share updates about our daily lives, which makes me feel closer to them.

建议: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น 'patient case' ควรใช้ 'patient cases' และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'but' แทน 'however' ในที่นี้ และใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'exotic restaurants' และ 'new destinations'

示例: Nowadays, we mainly chat about work and patient cases, but when I have free time, we often talk about exotic restaurants we want to visit together or new destinations like the Maldives.

建议: ควรแก้ไขไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ เช่น 'realigned' น่าจะเป็น 'real life' และใช้ 'I want' เป็น 'I want to' รวมถึงปรับประโยคให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

示例: Well, to be honest, as an introvert, I prefer chatting with only one friend, especially in real life or through Instagram DMs, because it feels more relaxed and I don't feel stressed about writing in a group chat.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น แก้ไขประโยคที่ซ้ำซ้อนและใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงแก้ไขคำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง

示例: It depends. If it's something serious like work or patient case discussions, I definitely prefer face-to-face conversations because they are more private and we can understand each other's emotions better. However, during free time, I prefer chatting via social media.

建议: คำตอบดีที่แสดงเหตุผลและตัวอย่าง แต่ควรแก้ไขไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'This discussions' ควรเป็น 'These discussions' และปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

示例: Well, I don't argue with my friends often. When we do, it's usually about patient case discussions or the knowledge we need to prepare for upcoming exams because we want to make sure we understand everything correctly. These discussions help us learn better rather than cause conflict.

× I find that regular conversations allow us to maintain our close relationships despite the descent.

✓ I find that regular conversations allow us to maintain our close relationships despite the distance.

The word 'descent' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'distance' to indicate physical space between people. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects meaning.

× Nowadays the topic mainly about work and patient case.

✓ Nowadays the topics are mainly about work and patient cases.

The subject 'topic' should be plural 'topics' because it refers to multiple subjects. Also, 'patient case' should be plural 'patient cases' to match the plural 'topics'. The verb 'are' is needed for subject-verb agreement.

× However, when I have free time, we often chat about exotic restaurant that we want to go together or the new destination like Maldives.

✓ However, when I have free time, we often chat about exotic restaurants that we want to go to together or new destinations like the Maldives.

'Restaurant' should be plural 'restaurants' because it refers to multiple places. 'Destination' should be plural 'destinations' for the same reason. Also, 'go together' needs the preposition 'to' after 'go'. 'The Maldives' requires the definite article 'the'.

× Well to be honest an introvert like me want to chat with only one friend, especially realigned or Instagram DMS because it feel more relaxed and I don't have any stress from writing something in a group chat.

✓ Well, to be honest, an introvert like me wants to chat with only one friend, especially real-life or Instagram DMs, because it feels more relaxed and I don't have any stress from writing something in a group chat.

The verb 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with the singular subject 'an introvert like me' (third person singular). 'Realigned' is incorrect; the intended word is 'real-life'. 'Instagram DMS' should be plural 'DMs'. 'It feel' should be 'it feels' for subject-verb agreement.

× I would definitely prefer face to face conversation because it more private and we don't have to we we can we know each other emotion at that time.

✓ I would definitely prefer face-to-face conversation because it is more private and we can know each other's emotions at that time.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect modal verbs and pronouns ('we don't have to we we can'). The correct modal verb is 'can' to express ability. Also, 'it more private' needs the verb 'is'. 'Each other emotion' should be 'each other's emotions' to show possession and plural form.

× This discussions help us learn better rather than cause conflict.

✓ These discussions help us learn better rather than cause conflict.

'This discussions' is incorrect because 'discussions' is plural and should be preceded by 'these' instead of 'this'.