聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте повторений и ошибок, используйте связные предложения и уточняйте детали. Например, можно начать с прямого ответа, затем добавить детали о том, как и о чём вы обычно общаетесь.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It's part of my daily routine; I usually check social media first thing in the morning and catch up with them about our surroundings and daily life.

建议: Ответ должен быть более связным и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также стоит уточнить детали, чтобы сделать ответ более конкретным и интересным.

示例: We usually talk about recent events at school or in our city. Additionally, we discuss our preparations for exams, such as the IELTS, which helps us support each other.

建议: Ответ должен быть более чётким и без лишних слов-паразитов. Используйте связные слова и правильную структуру предложения, чтобы выразить свои предпочтения ясно.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I am an extrovert and enjoy diverse discussions rather than talking to just one friend.

建议: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать правильные фразы и объяснять причины предпочтения более ясно и связно.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe people's reactions and body language, which leads to better understanding compared to social media.

建议: Ответ должен быть более грамматически правильным и логичным. Избегайте двойных отрицаний и уточняйте причины, используя связные слова.

示例: It depends, but generally I don't argue with my friends because friendship is a complicated process that requires a strong connection and mutual respect.

× To be completely uncertain, I'll chat with my friends it it my everyday routine and as soon as I wo wake up I check my social media and have a conversation with my friends related to our environment and. Friends.

✓ To be completely honest, I chat with my friends as it is my everyday routine and as soon as I wake up, I check my social media and have a conversation with my friends related to our environment and friends.

The phrase 'To be completely uncertain' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To be completely honest'. The phrase 'I'll chat' suggests future tense, but the context is about a habitual action, so present tense 'I chat' is appropriate. The phrase 'it it' is a typo and should be 'as it is'. 'wo wake up' is a typo and should be 'wake up'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, it's actually our recently events which took place in our school or in our city or we are preparing for exams like for instance IELTS exam.

✓ Well, it's actually our recent events which took place in our school or in our city, or we are preparing for exams like, for instance, the IELTS exam.

The adjective 'recently' is an adverb and should be replaced with the adjective 'recent' to correctly modify 'events'. The sentence is corrected for punctuation and clarity. 'IELTS exam' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a specific exam.

× Two preferred to chat with a group of people or with only one friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than with only one friend.

The pronoun 'Two' is incorrect and should be 'I'. The phrase 'or with only one friend' is better expressed as 'rather than with only one friend' to show preference. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, umm, I'm a kind of person like extrovert and I prefer to chat and have a conversation with wide range of people, uh, with our discussion either than one friend only.

✓ Well, umm, I'm the kind of person who is an extrovert and I prefer to chat and have conversations with a wide range of people, rather than with only one friend.

The phrase 'a kind of person like extrovert' is incorrect; it should be 'the kind of person who is an extrovert'. 'With wide range of people' needs the article 'a' before 'wide range'. 'With our discussion either than one friend only' is unclear and corrected to 'rather than with only one friend' to express preference clearly.

× Well, I prefer communication face to face because it would allow to see people's reaction or body language and would lead to better connection and better understanding nurses and social media.

✓ Well, I prefer communication face to face because it allows me to see people's reactions and body language, which leads to better connection and better understanding than social media.

The phrase 'allow to see' is incorrect; it should be 'allows me to see'. 'People's reaction' should be plural 'reactions'. The phrase 'better understanding nurses and social media' is unclear and corrected to 'better understanding than social media' to compare face-to-face communication with social media.

× It depends, but generally I don't do not have argument with my friends because to become a friend it really complicated process which demand better great connection with SO friends.

✓ It depends, but generally I do not have arguments with my friends because becoming friends is a really complicated process which demands a great connection with close friends.

The phrase 'don't do not' is a double negative and should be 'do not'. 'Have argument' should be plural 'have arguments'. 'To become a friend it really complicated process' is incorrect; it should be 'becoming friends is a really complicated process'. 'Demand better great connection' is incorrect; it should be 'demands a great connection'. 'SO friends' is unclear and corrected to 'close friends'.