聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“chatting friends is an enjoyable active”应为“chatting with friends is an enjoyable activity”。建议注意动词搭配和冠词使用，同时回答应更简洁明了。

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to share the latest news and events happening on campus, such as upcoming exams.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少完整句子和具体细节。建议回答时使用完整句子，明确说明聊天内容，并适当使用连接词使表达连贯。

示例: We usually chat about our favorite games, including new characters and outfits, and share our opinions about game updates.

建议: 回答表达了个人偏好，但存在语法错误，如“holding a talking”应为“holding a conversation”。建议注意词汇搭配，并补充更多细节说明原因。

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I find it easier to start and maintain a conversation, and it's difficult for me to build good relationships with a large group.

建议: 回答不完整且有重复语气词，表达不流畅。建议减少语气词，完整表达观点，并具体说明原因。

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because face-to-face conversations make me feel stressed. For example, I worry about my appearance and whether my clothes are appropriate.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“a game company is really want to earn more money”应为“a game company really wants to earn more money”。建议使用正确的时态和语法，并更清晰地表达观点。

示例: Yes, we sometimes argue about small things. For example, once my friend said that a game company only wants to make money instead of improving the game quality, but I disagreed with her opinion.

× I think chatting friends is an enjoyable active as it allow me to share the latest events or news happening at our campus such as upcoming exams which can keep me.

✓ I think chatting with friends is an enjoyable activity as it allows me to share the latest events or news happening at our campus such as upcoming exams which can keep me informed.

这里缺少介词“with”，应为“chatting with friends”，表示“与朋友聊天”。“active”应为名词“activity”。动词“allow”应与主语“chatting with friends”保持单数形式，改为“allows”。

× Besides, I mentioned before we will discuss our favorite games, we are talking about new characters or suits and discuss whether it's.

✓ Besides, as I mentioned before, we discuss our favorite games, talk about new characters or suits, and discuss whether it's...

句子中“mentioned”后缺少连接词“as”，使句子更通顺。动词时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时“discuss”、“talk”。

× Well, I'm more interested in chatting with one friend as I'm not good at starting a conversation or holding a talking.

✓ Well, I'm more interested in chatting with one friend as I'm not good at starting a conversation or holding a talk.

“holding a talking”中“talking”应为名词“talk”，表示“进行谈话”。

× It's too hard for me to build a good relationship with all.

✓ It's too hard for me to build a good relationship with everyone.

“with all”不完整，应使用“with everyone”表示“与所有人”。

× Uh, I may choose the social media as face to face communication will make me feel stressful.

✓ Uh, I may choose social media as face-to-face communication makes me feel stressed.

“the social media”应去掉定冠词“the”，因为“social media”是不可数名词。形容词“stressful”表示“令人感到压力的”，应改为“stressed”表示“感到压力的”。

× I would uh, worry about my uh, parents and the outfits, whether they are appropriate, but the social.

✓ I would, uh, worry about my, uh, parents and my outfits, whether they are appropriate, but social media...

“the outfits”应改为“my outfits”，表示“我的衣服”。句子不完整，需补充完整。

× Sometimes we will have a conflict on a very small thing.

✓ Sometimes we have conflicts over very small things.

“will have”在这里不合适，表示习惯动作应使用一般现在时“have”。“a conflict on a very small thing”应改为“conflicts over very small things”，更自然。

× For example one time she complained a game company is really want to earn more money rather than improving the game quality and I said no you are wrong, the company love it.

✓ For example, one time she complained that a game company really wants to earn more money rather than improve the game quality, and I said, 'No, you are wrong, the company loves it.'

“complained a game company”应加连接词“that”。“is really want”时态错误，应为“really wants”。“improving”应改为动词原形“improve”与“rather than”搭配。主语“company”单数，动词应为“loves”。