聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata. Misalnya, gunakan kalimat langsung yang menjawab pertanyaan dan tambahkan detail yang relevan dengan menggunakan kata penghubung.

示例: I like chatting with friends when I feel sad or depressed because it helps me feel better. However, if I am very tired, I prefer to rest instead of chatting.

建议: Perbaiki kejelasan dan kelancaran kalimat dengan menghilangkan pengulangan dan memperbaiki tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan kalimat utama dan detail pendukung yang jelas, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide.

示例: Since I am in my twenties, my conversations with friends often focus on quarter-life crises, such as our future plans and relationships.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan jelas. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan logis.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable and can open up better than when I am in a group.

建议: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan kejelasan ide. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan detail yang relevan, serta hindari kalimat yang tidak jelas atau tidak lengkap.

示例: I communicate both face-to-face and via social media, but for serious topics like my relationships, I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more personal.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan efektif.

示例: I believe all friends argue sometimes, but usually the arguments are small and we can easily resolve them.

× It depends from what mood I are in that this situation.

✓ It depends on what mood I am in in this situation.

The correct preposition to use with 'depends' is 'on', not 'from'. Also, 'I are' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am'. The phrase 'that this situation' is awkward; 'in this situation' is better.

× It depends from what mood I are in that this situation.

✓ It depends on what mood I am in in this situation.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'am' not 'are'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× I think that it's important for me to having a chat with friends with a friend.

✓ I think that it's important for me to have a chat with a friend.

After 'important for me to', the base form of the verb 'have' should be used, not the gerund 'having'. Also, 'with friends with a friend' is redundant; 'with a friend' is sufficient.

× But uh, I, I feel so tired so it is not fun for.

✓ But uh, I feel so tired that it is not fun for me.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'not fun for'. Adding 'me' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Since my age is around 20s since since I'm in my 20s, so the chat is the chat topic is not far from the quarter life crisis for what future we like to be in that or about relationship about.

✓ Since I am in my 20s, the chat topics are usually about quarter-life crisis, what future we want to have, or about relationships.

The original sentence has awkward prepositions and redundancy. 'Since my age is around 20s' is better expressed as 'Since I am in my 20s'. 'Chat topic is not far from' is better as 'chat topics are usually about'. Also, 'for what future we like to be in that' is unclear; 'what future we want to have' is clearer.

× I prefer having chat with only one friend.

✓ I prefer having a chat with only one friend.

The noun 'chat' needs an article 'a' when singular. So it should be 'a chat'.

× I don't think that I am being comfortable having chat with a group of friends with a group of friends and I don't think that I realize that open to them.

✓ I don't think that I am comfortable having a chat with a group of friends, and I don't think that I can really open up to them.

'Being comfortable' is better as 'comfortable'. 'Having chat' needs an article 'a chat'. The phrase 'I realize that open to them' is incorrect; it should be 'I can really open up to them'.

× I can really open if I only chat with one people, one person.

✓ I can really open up if I only chat with one person.

'One people' is incorrect; 'people' is plural, so 'one person' is correct. Also, 'open' should be 'open up' to mean sharing feelings.

× I do both communication face to face and social media, but if the topic is so heavy like about me but my my relationship, I would like to be happy.

✓ I communicate both face to face and via social media, but if the topic is heavy, like about me or my relationship, I prefer face-to-face communication.

'Do both communication' is awkward; 'communicate both' is better. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. 'Via social media' is the correct preposition. The phrase 'I would like to be happy' is unclear and replaced with a clearer preference.

× If you're having conversation by face to face, then by via social media, Zuma is.

✓ If you're having a conversation face to face, then rather than via social media, it's better.

'Having conversation' needs an article 'a conversation'. 'By face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'face to face'. 'By via social media' is incorrect; 'via social media' is correct. The word 'Zuma is' is unclear and omitted.

× Is there any friends in the world who did, who didn't argue?

✓ Are there any friends in the world who didn't argue?

'Is there any friends' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural; it should be 'Are there any friends'. The phrase 'who did, who didn't argue' is confusing; simplified to 'who didn't argue'.

× I think all of friends in the world are having an argument, an argument.

✓ I think all friends in the world have arguments.

'All of friends' should be 'all friends'. 'Are having an argument' suggests one argument now; 'have arguments' is more general and appropriate.

× And I don't think that it is a big argument like it is not big problem for us and we can manage it, we.

✓ And I don't think that it is a big argument; it's not a big problem for us and we can manage it.

Missing article 'a' before 'big problem'. The sentence is incomplete and needs punctuation to separate ideas. The trailing 'we' is unnecessary and removed.