聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, and check for grammar errors such as 'stay' instead of 'day', and 'tears me' which should be 'cheer me'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. Sharing stories about my daily life allows me to feel connected and receive valuable advice. For example, when I feel stressed, talking to my friends cheers me up and makes me feel supported.

建议: Focus on using natural expressions and correct prepositions. Avoid awkward phrases like 'do discussions' and 'make up plans where we have to go'. Use linking words to improve coherence and be more specific about your plans.

示例: I usually talk about our day and make future plans. For example, when the weekend is coming, we often plan to go out for lunch or dinner together. This helps us stay connected and understand each other's schedules for the week.

建议: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repeating ideas and use linking words to organize your answer logically. Also, use 'one friend' instead of '1 friend' and correct articles like 'a group of people'.

示例: I prefer talking to one friend rather than a group because a single friend can better understand my feelings. Sharing personal thoughts with one person makes me feel more comfortable and allows me to receive thoughtful advice.

建议: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect your reasons clearly. For example, say 'When you connect with someone face-to-face, you can see their expressions and better understand their feelings, which social media cannot provide.'

示例: I prefer communicating face-to-face rather than through social media because when you connect in person, you can see the other person's expressions and better understand their feelings. Social media doesn't offer this level of connection.

建议: Focus on grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain your reasoning clearly. For example, 'I don't argue with my friends because we have mutual understanding. I listen carefully to their side before giving advice, which helps avoid conflicts.'

示例: No, I don't argue with my friends because we have mutual understanding. I always listen to their side first, then offer advice. This approach helps us avoid arguments.

× I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it helped me relax after a busy day stay.

✓ I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it helped me relax after a busy day.

The word 'stay' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The phrase 'a busy day' is sufficient to convey the meaning. Removing 'stay' corrects the sentence.

× Sharing stories about my daily life allow me to feel connected and also get valuable feedback or advice from them.

✓ Sharing stories about my daily life allows me to feel connected and also get valuable feedback or advice from them.

The subject 'Sharing stories' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' instead of 'allow' to agree in number.

× For For example, when I get stressed I'm talk to my friends, they always tears me and make me feel supported.

✓ For example, when I get stressed, I talk to my friends; they always cheer me and make me feel supported.

The phrase 'I'm talk' is incorrect; it should be 'I talk' to match the present tense. 'Tears me' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'cheer me'. Also, 'For For' is a repetition and should be 'For'. Punctuation is added for clarity.

× I usually do discussions about the day and also make future plans.

✓ I usually have discussions about the day and also make future plans.

The verb 'do' is not typically used with 'discussions'. The correct verb is 'have' when referring to discussions.

× Moreover, when there's a weekend coming, we used to make up plans where we have to go for lunch and dinner.

✓ Moreover, when there's a weekend coming, we usually make plans to go for lunch and dinner.

The phrase 'used to make up plans' implies a past habit that no longer occurs, which conflicts with 'when there's a weekend coming' (present/future). 'Usually make plans' fits better here.

× So I think this is the way we chat and get to know about each other plans for the week.

✓ So I think this is the way we chat and get to know each other's plans for the week.

The phrase 'each other plans' is incorrect. The possessive form 'each other's plans' is needed to show possession.

× I prefer to talk to 1 friend instead of talking to group of the people.

✓ I prefer to talk to one friend instead of talking to a group of people.

'1 friend' should be written as 'one friend' in formal writing. Also, 'group of the people' is incorrect; it should be 'a group of people'.

× The group of people may not understand the feeling of 1 friend, can understand sharing your feelings with one person, can understand your feelings and also make you comfortable and give you advice on that.

✓ The group of people may not understand the feelings of one friend; sharing your feelings with one person can help you feel comfortable and get advice.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. Pronouns and sentence structure are corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I love to communicate face to face rather than social media.

✓ I love to communicate face to face rather than via social media.

The preposition 'via' is needed before 'social media' to indicate the means of communication.

× When you connected with someone, you have to see that person physically.

✓ When you connect with someone, you have to see that person physically.

The verb 'connected' is past tense, but the sentence is general, so present tense 'connect' is appropriate.

× You can express your feeling and understand their feelings also.

✓ You can express your feelings and understand their feelings as well.

'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match 'their feelings'. Also, 'also' is better replaced with 'as well' for smoother flow.

× I think the social media does not do that.

✓ I think social media does not do that.

'Social media' is uncountable and does not need the definite article 'the'.

× No, I don't argue with my friends.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends.

This sentence is correct and requires no correction.

× I feel like if there is a mutual understanding between the friends I there's no argue.

✓ I feel that if there is mutual understanding between friends, there is no argument.

The conjunction 'like if' is incorrect; 'that if' is appropriate. 'I there's no argue' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'there is no argument'.

× I always listen the first side of my friends, then I give advice on the topic.

✓ I always listen to the first side of my friends, then I give advice on the topic.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object.

× In this way we don't have any argument on the topic.

✓ In this way, we don't have any arguments on the topic.

'Argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match the context of 'any'. A comma is added after 'way' for clarity.