聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda çoxlu "uh" və təkrarlar var, bu da təbii və axıcı danışığı azaldır. Daha qısa və aydın cümlələr qurmağa çalışın, məsələn, mövzunu birbaşa ifadə edin və əlavə dəstəkləyici məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friends, because we can share everything about our families, husbands, and children.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə çoxlu "uh" və təkrarlar var, bu da cavabınızın təbii və axıcı olmasına mane olur. Mövzunu daha dəqiq və əlaqəli şəkildə ifadə edin, əlavə olaraq əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

示例: We usually talk about our families, including our husbands, mother-in-laws, children, as well as our past experiences and childhood memories.

建议: Cavabınız ümumilikdə yaxşıdır, lakin "It's on" ifadəsi mənasızdır və qarışıqlığa səbəb olur. Daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin.

示例: I prefer chatting with my best friend because I feel comfortable and can be myself without hesitation. I trust her deeply and share personal stories openly.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərlə cavabınızı daha axıcı edin. Məsələn, "sometimes" və "therefore" kimi sözlərdən istifadə edə bilərsiniz.

示例: I like both face-to-face communication and social media because sometimes we are busy, so we use apps like WhatsApp or Telegram to stay in touch.

建议: Cavabınız məzmun baxımından yaxşıdır, lakin "Dissimilarity" sözü burada mənasızdır, çünki siz oxşarlıqdan bəhs edirsiniz. Daha uyğun söz seçin və cümlələrinizi daha aydın edin.

示例: No, I never argue with my friends because we have similar personalities and opinions. When disagreements happen, we talk calmly and quickly find solutions, which strengthens our friendship.

× Yes, I like chatting my uh, friends actually, uh, specially, I'm sorry, specially uh, with my best friends, uh, because, uh, we can share everything each other, uh, about our family, about our husbands, about our children's.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my uh, friends actually, uh, especially, I'm sorry, especially uh, with my best friends, uh, because, uh, we can share everything with each other, uh, about our family, about our husbands, about our children.

The verb 'like' is correctly followed by the gerund form 'chatting'. However, the verb 'chatting' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the people involved. Also, 'each other' needs the preposition 'with' to be grammatically correct. 'Specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially'. 'Children's' is a possessive form but the plural noun 'children' is needed here without the possessive apostrophe.

× we can share everything each other

✓ we can share everything with each other

The phrase 'each other' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate mutual action. Omitting 'with' is a common prepositional error.

× specially, I'm sorry, specially uh, with my best friends

✓ especially, I'm sorry, especially uh, with my best friends

The word 'specially' is an adjective meaning 'for a special purpose', but the adverb 'especially' is correct here to mean 'particularly' or 'mainly'.

× about our children's

✓ about our children

'Children's' is the possessive form of 'children'. Here, the plural noun 'children' is needed without the possessive apostrophe to refer to multiple children.

× we usually talk about our family, our husbands, our mother-in-laws, our children, our uh, past, our childhood, and then uh, our umm, ex.

✓ we usually talk about our family, our husbands, our mothers-in-law, our children, our uh, past, our childhood, and then uh, our umm, ex.

The plural of 'mother-in-law' is 'mothers-in-law', not 'mother-in-laws'. This is a compound noun where the plural marker applies to the main noun 'mother'.

× our mother-in-laws

✓ our mothers-in-law

The plural form of 'mother-in-law' is 'mothers-in-law' because the plural suffix applies to the main noun 'mother'.

× And friend, of course.

✓ A friend, of course.

The indefinite article 'a' is required before the singular noun 'friend' to indicate one friend.

× Both of these communication ways are OK for me because sometimes we are busy and face to face communication isn't available for us

✓ Both of these communication ways are OK for me because sometimes we are busy and face-to-face communication isn't available to us

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. Also, the correct preposition is 'available to us' rather than 'available for us'.