聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and using proper verb tenses. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question without adding unrelated information. For example, focus on why you like chatting with friends and how it helps you.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially since I live abroad. My old friends live in my hometown, so I make sure to talk with them whenever I have free time. It helps me stay connected and feel less homesick.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be specific about the topics you discuss with your friends and avoid unrelated or confusing statements.

示例: We usually chat about everyday things like the weather and work. For example, I tell them about my job here, and they share news from home, like when a friend recently got married. These conversations help us stay updated on each other's lives.

建议: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why you prefer group chats. Keep your answer concise and focused.

示例: I prefer chatting in groups on WhatsApp or social media because there are many people with different experiences. For instance, if I need advice, I can ask the group, and everyone shares their opinions, which helps me find solutions.

建议: Clarify your ideas and avoid contradictory statements. Use proper grammar and linking words to explain your preference clearly. Be specific about the advantages and disadvantages of each method.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because my old friends live in the countryside, so meeting face-to-face is difficult. Although sometimes online communication can be challenging, it allows us to stay connected despite the distance.

建议: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Provide a clear and coherent answer with specific details about when and why you argue with friends. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on certain topics. However, we always find solutions and it helps us understand each other better. Arguing can be a way to strengthen our friendship.

× talking with my friends is my most preferable activity as I live in abroad

✓ talking with my friends is my most preferable activity as I live abroad

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'abroad'. The correct phrase is 'live abroad' without 'in'.

× My old friends are live in my countryside

✓ My old friends live in my countryside

The verb 'are live' is incorrect. The correct present tense form is 'live' without 'are' for the plural subject 'friends'.

× I talk with them and spending time with them

✓ I talk with them and spend time with them

After 'and', the verb should be in base form to maintain parallel structure. 'Spending' should be 'spend'.

× you're playing online games also

✓ I also play online games

The sentence incorrectly uses 'you're' (you are) instead of 'I'. Also, the verb should be in simple present tense 'play' to match the subject 'I'.

× On the topic, our topics are based on the weather and as I'm working here and our country said we are not allowing the girls who working as well as some kind of family. Cheers.

✓ Our topics are usually about the weather. Since I am working here, and in our country, girls are not allowed to work as well as take care of family responsibilities.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. It needs to be split into clearer sentences and corrected for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Last time my friend get married and it is so long time about the marriage and it too I missed it

✓ Last time my friend got married, and it has been a long time since the marriage, which I missed

The verb 'get' should be in past tense 'got'. The sentence also needs restructuring for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I like to chat with a group of people actually in my WhatsApp or in social media

✓ I like to chat with groups of people, actually on WhatsApp or social media

'A group of people' is singular; since multiple groups are mentioned later, 'groups' plural is more appropriate. Also, 'on WhatsApp' is the correct preposition.

× We have a so many groups and talk in a group with a different kind of story

✓ We have so many groups and talk in groups about different kinds of stories

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'so many groups'. Also, 'a different kind of story' should be plural to match 'groups'.

× if we, I want, uh, any solution, I talk in a group so everyone have the experience about if they have, they share their experience and teach us how I can

✓ If I want any solution, I talk in a group so everyone has experience; if they have it, they share their experience and teach us how I can do it

The sentence has pronoun confusion and subject-verb agreement errors. 'Everyone have' should be 'everyone has'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate via the social media because somewhere I told before my all old friends are live in a countryside

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because, as I said before, all my old friends live in the countryside

'Via social media' is correct without 'the'. 'Live in a countryside' should be 'live in the countryside'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× But for the social media it's a difficult to talk with him

✓ But through social media, it's difficult to talk with them

'Social media' is plural or uncountable, so 'through social media' is better. 'Him' is incorrect as the referent is plural friends; 'them' is correct.

× there are some topics which I like to argue with my friends

✓ There are some topics about which I like to argue with my friends

The verb 'argue' is usually followed by 'about' or 'over' to indicate the topic. 'Argue with' indicates the person, but the topic needs 'about'.

× but uh, we know the solution, but uh, yeah to cheering to friends and arguing with friends

✓ but we know the solution. Yes, cheering with friends and arguing with friends

The sentence uses 'but' twice unnecessarily and has unclear meaning. It is corrected for clarity and proper conjunction use.