聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的句子表达原因。

示例: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps me practice different languages and learn new things.

建议: 回答内容不够具体，词汇使用不准确，且表达不连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: We usually chat about food, weather, fashion, and sometimes our personal feelings.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议直接表达偏好，并用具体理由支持，同时使用连接词。

示例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to hear different opinions and learn new ideas.

建议: 回答较为自然，但有语法和表达上的小错误。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，表达更流畅。

示例: I like both ways. Social media is convenient and flexible, but face-to-face communication helps me understand people's emotions better.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when we have different opinions, but it's normal because emotions and feelings vary.

× Yes, I think most of my favorite thing is talking with some people and when I was a kid I enjoy talking so I like to learn different kind of languages to make myself can talk with many people.

✓ Yes, I think most of my favorite things are talking with some people and when I was a kid I enjoyed talking so I like to learn different kinds of languages to make myself able to talk with many people.

这里“most of my favorite thing”应为复数形式“most of my favorite things”，因为“most of”后面接复数名词；“different kind of languages”应为“different kinds of languages”，表示多种不同的语言；“when I was a kid I enjoy talking”时态不一致，应改为过去时“enjoyed”；“make myself can talk”结构不正确，应改为“make myself able to talk”。

× Yes, I think most of my favorite thing is talking with some people and when I was a kid I enjoy talking so I like to learn different kind of languages to make myself can talk with many people.

✓ Yes, I think most of my favorite things are talking with some people and when I was a kid I enjoyed talking so I like to learn different kinds of languages to make myself able to talk with many people.

“when I was a kid”是过去时间，后面的动词“enjoy”应使用过去式“enjoyed”，保持时态一致。

× Well, I think it's gossiper all the time. The food, the weather, the makeup, the dressing, and the deeply, the deeply feeling in my heart.

✓ Well, I think it's gossip all the time. The food, the weather, the makeup, the dressing, and the deep, the deep feeling in my heart.

“gossiper”指的是“爱说闲话的人”，这里应使用“gossip”表示“闲聊”；“deeply”是副词，应改为形容词“deep”修饰“feeling”。

× Well, I think it's gossiper all the time. The food, the weather, the makeup, the dressing, and the deeply, the deeply feeling in my heart.

✓ Well, I think it's gossip all the time. The food, the weather, the makeup, the dressing, and the deep, the deep feeling in my heart.

“deeply”是副词，不能直接修饰名词“feeling”，应使用形容词“deep”。

× Well, actually I prefer to check with a group of people because he can just show the different feelings between people and maybe something.

✓ Well, actually I prefer to chat with a group of people because it can just show the different feelings between people and maybe something.

“check”应为“chat”，意思是“聊天”；“he”指代不明，群体应使用“it”或“they”，这里用“it”指代“a group”。

× Well, actually I prefer to check with a group of people because he can just show the different feelings between people and maybe something.

✓ Well, actually I prefer to chat with a group of people because it can just show the different feelings between people and maybe something.

“he”用来指代群体不合适，应使用“it”指代“a group of people”。

× Both of them I saying the social media is more convenient and is more flexible, but when you communicate with people face to face, you can just catch, uh, catch the emotion in their face.

✓ Both of them. I think social media is more convenient and more flexible, but when you communicate with people face to face, you can catch the emotion on their face.

“I saying”应为“I think”或“I am saying”；“in their face”应为“on their face”；“Both of them”后应加句号分开句子。

× Both of them I saying the social media is more convenient and is more flexible, but when you communicate with people face to face, you can just catch, uh, catch the emotion in their face.

✓ Both of them. I think social media is more convenient and more flexible, but when you communicate with people face to face, you can catch the emotion on their face.

“catch the emotion in their face”中介词应为“on”，表示“在脸上”。

× Yes, I argue with them all the time, especially when we have different source, but it's not a big deal you just because sometimes we are being emotional or we just have different kind of feeling about the things.

✓ Yes, I argue with them all the time, especially when we have different sources, but it's not a big deal because sometimes we are emotional or we just have different kinds of feelings about things.

“different source”应为复数“different sources”；“different kind of feeling”应为“different kinds of feelings”；“about the things”中“the”多余，应去掉。

× Yes, I argue with them all the time, especially when we have different source, but it's not a big deal you just because sometimes we are being emotional or we just have different kind of feeling about the things.

✓ Yes, I argue with them all the time, especially when we have different sources, but it's not a big deal because sometimes we are emotional or we just have different kinds of feelings about things.

“you just because”结构错误，应改为“because”引导原因状语从句。