聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it makes me feel relaxed and happy. However, I sometimes find it difficult due to my shy personality.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用连贯的句子，并用连接词使内容更流畅。

示例: I usually start by talking about the weather because it's an easy way to begin a conversation. I prefer not to discuss sports since many people are very passionate about it, and I don't share the same interest.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够准确。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，并简洁表达观点。

示例: Honestly, I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel anxious and less confident when talking in a group.

建议: 回答内容不够连贯，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，注意句子结构。

示例: Both face-to-face communication and social media have their pros and cons. Face-to-face allows us to understand emotions better, while social media is more convenient for chatting anytime.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地表达观点。

示例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions, but we always remain friendly since they are important to me.

× So it a little bit confused to me to have conversation with friends.

✓ So it is a little bit confusing to me to have conversations with friends.

这里需要使用现在分词形式"confusing"来表示使人感到困惑的状态，而不是过去分词"confused"。此外，"conversation"应使用复数形式，因为通常是多次对话。

× Well, in first step I usually chat about the weather that day because it is a good introduction for further conversation.

✓ Well, in the first step I usually chat about the weather of that day because it is a good introduction for further conversation.

短语中缺少定冠词"the"，应为"in the first step"。此外，"the weather that day"应改为"the weather of that day"以表达当天的天气。

× Then I don't like to talk sports with others because many people like sports very much so that is a very a good topic for them to.

✓ Then I don't like to talk about sports with others because many people like sports very much, so that is a very good topic for them too.

动词"talk"后应加介词"about"。"a very a good"中多余一个冠词"a"。"to"应为"too"表示“也”。

× Well honestly I like to chat with a friend rather than a group of people because in front of them I will got a sense of anxiety and unconfidence.

✓ Well honestly I like to chat with a friend rather than a group of people because in front of them I will get a sense of anxiety and lack of confidence.

"will got"中"got"应为原形"get"，因为情态动词后接动词原形。"unconfidence"不是正确单词，应改为"lack of confidence"。

× So that is a good not a advantage for me to have conversation with them.

✓ So that is not a good advantage for me to have conversations with them.

"a good not a advantage"语序错误，应为"not a good advantage"。"conversation"应使用复数形式。

× World is advantages and disadvantages between them.

✓ There are advantages and disadvantages between them in the world.

句子缺少主语"There are"，且"World is advantages and disadvantages"结构不正确，应调整为"There are advantages and disadvantages between them in the world."。

× For face to face talk it can easily get the sense between people when the face or their feelings.

✓ For face-to-face talk, it is easy to get the sense between people through their facial expressions or feelings.

"face to face"应连字符连接为"face-to-face"。"get the sense between people when the face or their feelings"表达不清，应改为"get the sense between people through their facial expressions or feelings"。

× But for social medias it is very convenient for every people to chat.

✓ But for social media, it is very convenient for everyone to chat.

"social medias"应为不可数名词"social media"。"every people"应为"everyone"。

× Well, sometimes I will have argument with them because there's disagreements between us, but we will always stay friendly because they are my friends after all, so I will not get very much to them.

✓ Well, sometimes I will have arguments with them because there are disagreements between us, but we will always stay friendly because they are my friends after all, so I will not get very upset with them.

"have argument"应为复数"have arguments"。"there's disagreements"应为"there are disagreements"。"get very much to them"表达不正确，应为"get very upset with them"。