聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I usually socialize with my friends when I'm free' instead of 'I always socializing with my friend'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Usually, when I have free time, I socialize with them by doing outdoor activities, chatting, and sometimes eating and drinking together.

建议: Avoid vague phrases like 'a lot of different stuff' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly. For example, say 'We usually talk about our daily lives, such as studying, working, family gatherings, or personal stories.'

示例: We usually chat about our daily lives, including topics like studying, work, family gatherings, and personal experiences.

建议: Improve grammar and clarity by saying 'I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more exciting and I can learn from their different experiences.' Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words like 'because' to connect reasons.

示例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more exciting and I can learn from their different experiences.

建议: Complete your sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. For example, say 'Face-to-face communication is better because it is more lively, makes conversations more engaging, and strengthens relationships.'

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more lively, makes conversations more engaging, and helps strengthen relationships.

建议: Avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar. For example, say 'I sometimes argue with my friends, but I try to stay calm to maintain a harmonious environment.' Also, avoid repeating ideas and finish your thoughts clearly.

示例: I sometimes argue with my friends, but I try to stay calm to maintain a harmonious environment.

× Uh, normally when I'm free I always socializing with my friend, doing some out outdoor activities alongside chatting freely and probably drinking and eating as well.

✓ Uh, normally when I'm free I am always socializing with my friends, doing some outdoor activities alongside chatting freely and probably drinking and eating as well.

The verb 'socializing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with more than one person. 'Out outdoor' is redundant; 'outdoor' alone is correct.

× doing some out outdoor activities alongside chatting freely and probably drinking and eating as well.

✓ doing some outdoor activities alongside chatting freely and probably drinking and eating as well.

The phrase 'out outdoor' is incorrect; 'outdoor' alone is the correct adjective to describe activities done outside.

× So we normally chat a lot of different stuff.

✓ So we normally chat about a lot of different things.

The word 'stuff' is uncountable and informal; 'things' is more appropriate here. Also, 'chat' is usually followed by 'about' when indicating topics of conversation.

× How about like studying or working or even gather, gathering together with family or any loving story.

✓ How about studying or working or even gathering together with family or any loving story.

The phrase 'gather, gathering' is redundant; only 'gathering' is needed. Also, 'like' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for clarity.

× normally when I'm free I always socializing with my friend

✓ normally when I'm free I am always socializing with my friends

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of socializing with more than one person.

× So I prefer stay calm even when we got some misunderstandings with each others.

✓ So I prefer to stay calm even when we have some misunderstandings with each other.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'stay'. 'Got' is informal past tense; 'have' is more appropriate here. 'Each others' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'each other'.

× First of all, chatting with a group of people can make me feel excited because I can know more knowledge from different people and different experience.

✓ First of all, chatting with a group of people can make me feel excited because I can gain more knowledge from different people and different experiences.

'Know more knowledge' is incorrect; the verb 'gain' is appropriate with 'knowledge'. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'different'.

× face to face conversation is more lively, makes the topics more engaging and bond our relationships more closer.

✓ Face-to-face conversation is livelier, makes the topics more engaging and bonds our relationships closer.

'More lively' should be the comparative form 'livelier'. 'Bond' should be 'bonds' to agree with the singular subject. 'More closer' is incorrect; 'closer' alone is sufficient.