聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınız təbii və aydın olsa da, bəzi ifadələrdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha qısa və konkret cümlələr qurmağa çalışın, məsələn, "I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share stories and experiences." kimi.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share stories and experiences from different situations.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Məsələn, "discuss about" ifadəsi səhvdir, sadəcə "discuss" istifadə olunur. Daha spesifik mövzular əlavə edin və cümlələri daha aydın qurun.

示例: We usually chat about our personal experiences and how we handled different situations.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Məsələn, "a crowd of people crossing" ifadəsi aydın deyil. Daha sadə və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin və fikrinizi birbaşa ifadə edin.

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal experiences and having fun together.

建议: Cümlənizdə anlaşılmaz ifadələr və qrammatik səhvlər var. "Communicating fresh toys" ifadəsi səhvdir. Daha aydın və düzgün ifadələrdən istifadə edin və fikrinizi qısa və konkret şəkildə ifadə edin.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me express emotions clearly and understand others better through their body language.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və tamamlanmamış fikirlər var. "Discuss about" səhvdir, sadəcə "discuss" istifadə olunur. Cümlələri tam və aydın ifadə edin.

示例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions, but we always try to understand each other and find an agreement.

× Yes, I like to catch up, share stories with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like catching up and sharing stories with my friends.

After 'like', when expressing general preferences, the gerund form (-ing) is commonly used. Therefore, 'like catching up' and 'sharing stories' are correct forms.

× We can communicate about different things, stories or share with our experience in different situations.

✓ We can communicate about different things, stories, or share our experiences in different situations.

The preposition 'with' is unnecessary before 'our experience'. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the context of multiple situations.

× In short, we're just sharing our experience and with different stories.

✓ In short, we're just sharing our experiences and different stories.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here. It should be omitted to correctly connect 'sharing' with 'our experiences and different stories'.

× Umm, they love to discuss about, uh, how they did that.

✓ Umm, they love to discuss how they did that.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Using 'discuss about' is incorrect.

× I don't like when a crowd of people crossing 'cause it's a very annoying and it makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I don't like when a crowd of people is crossing because it's very annoying and it makes me feel uncomfortable.

'Crowd' is a singular noun and requires the singular verb 'is crossing'. Also, 'a very annoying' is incorrect; 'very annoying' without 'a' is correct.

× So I prefer uh to walk with only one friend to talk about something to share our personal experience and just be together and have fun.

✓ So I prefer to walk with only one friend to talk about something, share our personal experiences, just be together, and have fun.

The sentence needed commas for clarity and 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the context.

× In my opinion, communicating fresh toys is the best way of communication.

✓ In my opinion, communicating face-to-face is the best way of communication.

'Fresh toys' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'face-to-face', which is the correct phrase here.

× It allows me to express my emotions more clearly and understand other better with their uh, bad language or the with their emotions, uh, I can see if someone is generally interested or upset, which is difficult to detect on social media.

✓ It allows me to express my emotions more clearly and understand others better with their body language or their emotions. I can see if someone is generally interested or upset, which is difficult to detect on social media.

'Other' should be plural 'others'. 'Bad language' is incorrect in this context; 'body language' is appropriate. Also, the sentence was split for clarity.

× Sometimes I do argue with my friends but it depends on the situation.

✓ Sometimes I do argue with my friends, but it depends on the situation.

A comma is needed before 'but' to separate the clauses properly.

× People have different opinions and everyone wants to explain their point.

✓ People have different opinions and everyone wants to explain his or her point.

'Everyone' is singular and should be matched with singular pronouns like 'his or her' instead of plural 'their'.

× So everyone have rights and they can discuss about everything or they can choose agree or.

✓ So everyone has rights and they can discuss everything or choose to agree or disagree.

'Everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not need 'about'. The sentence was completed for clarity.