聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use more natural expressions. For example, instead of 'it is very beautiful moment', you can say 'it's a wonderful experience'.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me happy and it's always a wonderful experience to connect with them.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question with specific topics you discuss. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your sentences properly.

示例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, school, and sometimes I share my feelings with a close friend when I feel sad.

建议: Your answer needs better grammar and clarity. Focus on why you prefer chatting with one friend and avoid irrelevant comments like appearance unless relevant. Use linking words to explain your preference.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because she understands me better than others, so our conversations are more meaningful.

建议: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Clearly state your preference and explain why. Use simple and correct sentences with linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to share emotions and body language, which makes the conversation more meaningful.

建议: Your answer has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Explain why you argue and how it affects your relationship using clear and correct sentences. Avoid vague words like 'movement'.

示例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my closest friend because she understands me well. These arguments help improve our communication and strengthen our bond.

× Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it gives me lots of happiness and it is very beautiful moment that I am chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it gives me lots of happiness and it is a very beautiful moment when I am chatting with my friends.

The phrase 'very beautiful moment' needs an article 'a' before it because 'moment' is a singular countable noun. Also, 'that I am chatting' should be 'when I am chatting' to correctly express the time of the moment.

× There are different types of talk that I usually chat about with my friends and, uh, I really feel sometimes, uh, when I am very sad that I am chat about my friends and she is very innocent girl and.

✓ There are different types of topics that I usually chat about with my friends and, uh, sometimes when I am very sad, I talk about my friends, and she is a very innocent girl.

The phrase 'types of talk' is better expressed as 'types of topics'. 'I am chat about' is incorrect; it should be 'I talk about'. Also, 'she is very innocent girl' needs the article 'a' before 'very innocent girl'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I really chat with my only friend because it understand me a lot and she is only the one that she understand me better. She is very pretty.

✓ I really chat with my only friend because she understands me a lot and she is the only one who understands me better. She is very pretty.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to a person; 'she' should be used. Also, subject-verb agreement requires 'understands' with 'she'. The phrase 'only the one that she understand me better' is corrected to 'the only one who understands me better' for grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to communicate face to face by social media because when I am face to face communication skills I am shared lots of movement that I am created with her and it is very beautiful moment at I am great with her.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than by social media because when I communicate face to face, I share many moments that I create with her, and it is a very beautiful moment when I am with her.

The phrase 'face to face by social media' is contradictory; it should be 'face to face rather than by social media'. 'I am shared lots of movement' is incorrect; it should be 'I share many moments'. 'At I am great with her' is unclear and corrected to 'when I am with her'. Articles and prepositions are corrected for clarity.

× Yes I argue with my only one friends than anyone else because it is only one that understood me and when I am argue with her it's build my communication skill and build my bond better because when I am fight with her it creates me a lot of movement and memory.

✓ Yes, I argue with my only friend more than anyone else because she is the only one who understands me, and when I argue with her, it builds my communication skills and strengthens our bond because when I fight with her, it creates many moments and memories for me.

'My only one friends' is incorrect; it should be 'my only friend' (singular). 'It is only one that understood me' corrected to 'she is the only one who understands me' for subject-verb agreement and pronoun use. 'When I am argue' should be 'when I argue'. 'It's build' corrected to 'it builds'. 'Build my bond better' changed to 'strengthens our bond'. 'Creates me a lot of movement and memory' corrected to 'creates many moments and memories for me' for clarity and correct noun usage.