聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'talking' and 'chatting', you can say 'I prefer chatting because it allows multitasking, unlike phone calls which require full attention.'

示例: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it is a convenient way to communicate. Moreover, chatting allows me to multitask, whereas phone calls need my full attention.

建议: Your answer covers relevant topics but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to organise your ideas logically using linking words. Also, be more specific and correct in your expressions, for example, say 'patient assessments' instead of 'patient assess'.

示例: I usually chat about current affairs because I am interested in politics and the country's economic growth. Additionally, since I am a physiotherapist and my friend is too, we often discuss patient assessments and related topics.

建议: Your answer is clear but somewhat repetitive and has minor grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' effectively to connect ideas. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'give me a head' and instead say 'does not overwhelm me'.

示例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because communicating with a group can be difficult when I am busy. Since I multitask often as a physiotherapist, talking to one person at a time is more convenient and less overwhelming.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand'. Also, avoid repetition and be concise.

示例: It depends on the situation. For important matters, I prefer face-to-face communication. However, for simple discussions about patients, I find social media more convenient as it allows me to multitask.

建议: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and could be more natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words like 'when' and 'because' to improve coherence. Also, use simpler expressions such as 'I explain my point of view clearly' instead of 'validate my point'.

示例: Yes, I argue with friends when I think they are wrong. I explain my point of view clearly and express my feelings about the topic during the conversation.

× I do chat a lot with friends nowadays because I think chatting is more reliable and easy source of communications rather than talking.

✓ I do chat a lot with friends nowadays because I think chatting is a more reliable and easy source of communication rather than talking.

The phrase 'more reliable and easy source of communications' is incorrect because 'source' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'communication' not plural 'communications'. Also, 'a' is needed before 'more reliable' to indicate a singular source.

× In chatting, one can easily do 2 tasks hand in hand rather than talking in which one needs to concentrate only on calling and cannot do other tasks by voice.

✓ In chatting, one can easily do two tasks hand in hand rather than talking, in which one needs to concentrate only on calling and cannot do other tasks by voice.

The phrase 'rather than talking in which' is unclear and needs a comma before 'in which' to separate the clauses properly. Also, '2' should be written as 'two' in formal writing.

× I usually chat regarding the current affairs because I'm very, I am very much interested in politics and the countries, uh, GDP.

✓ I usually chat about current affairs because I am very interested in politics and the country's GDP.

The preposition 'regarding' is less natural here; 'chat about' is more appropriate. Also, 'the countries, uh, GDP' is incorrect; it should be 'the country's GDP' to indicate possession.

× So we discuss the patient assess.

✓ So we discuss patient assessments.

The phrase 'the patient assess' is incorrect; 'assess' is a verb, but here a noun is needed. The correct noun is 'assessment' or plural 'assessments' depending on context.

× I prefer to talk to only one friend rather than talking to so many people because I find it's very difficult to communicate with the group in a hurry.

✓ I prefer to talk to only one friend rather than talking to many people because I find it's very difficult to communicate with a group in a hurry.

The phrase 'so many people' is informal; 'many people' is more appropriate here. Also, 'the group' should be 'a group' as it is not a specific group previously mentioned.

× As I am a physiotherapist by profession, I need to do multi task all the time so I prefer to talk to one person at a time so that it doesn't give me a head.

✓ As I am a physiotherapist by profession, I need to multitask all the time so I prefer to talk to one person at a time so that it doesn't give me a headache.

The phrase 'do multi task' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'multitask'. Also, 'give me a head' is incomplete; the correct phrase is 'give me a headache'.

× It totally depends upon the situation when there is a need of communication from on face to face that is some important task is there.

✓ It totally depends on the situation; when there is a need for face-to-face communication, that is when some important task is there.

The phrase 'depends upon' is acceptable but 'depends on' is more common. 'Need of communication from on face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'need for face-to-face communication'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× While on the other hand if there is a simple discussion regarding the patient, I prefer to talk via the social media because it is much more convenient and I do I can do multi task at that specific.

✓ While on the other hand, if there is a simple discussion regarding the patient, I prefer to talk via social media because it is much more convenient and I can multitask at that time.

The phrase 'talk via the social media' is incorrect; 'via social media' is correct without 'the'. 'I do I can do multi task' is redundant and incorrect; 'I can multitask' is correct. 'At that specific' is incomplete; 'at that time' is appropriate.

× Yes, of course I do argue with friends whenever I feel like that the other person is wrong in the judgment.

✓ Yes, of course I do argue with friends whenever I feel that the other person is wrong in their judgment.

The phrase 'feel like that' is incorrect; 'feel that' is correct. Also, 'wrong in the judgment' should be 'wrong in their judgment' to specify whose judgment.

× I try to communicate my valid answer and point of view regarding the question that was being said during the conversation.

✓ I try to communicate my valid answer and point of view regarding the question that was raised during the conversation.

The phrase 'question that was being said' is incorrect; 'question that was raised' or 'asked' is appropriate. 'Being said' is not used with 'question'.

× I try to validate my point and express my feelings about my opinion.

✓ I try to validate my point and express my feelings about my opinion.

This sentence is grammatically correct but could be improved stylistically by avoiding redundancy between 'feelings' and 'opinion'. However, as per instructions, no correction is needed.