聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免重复表达“deep”和“enjoyable”，使语言更自然流畅。可以用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we have deep conversations. Sharing my thoughts and listening to their opinions helps me understand them better, which makes the experience very rewarding.

建议: 回答中时态不一致，且表达不够清晰。建议使用一致的时态，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

示例: We usually talk about how we have been doing recently and our future plans. Besides, we discuss any problems we are facing and share happy memories from our travels or experiences that brought us closer.

建议: 回答中出现不相关或不清晰的词汇（如“in the farm with droves”），影响表达效果。建议避免口语填充词，使用准确表达。

示例: Actually, I enjoy both. When I chat with a group, we share many joyful moments together. However, one-on-one conversations tend to be deeper, helping us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship.

建议: 回答较完整，但有较多口语填充词“uh”，建议减少使用，使表达更流畅自然。

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand the other person better. It also allows them to understand me more clearly.

建议: 回答中有口语填充词，且表达可以更自然流畅。建议用更地道的表达方式，减少重复。

示例: Yes, sometimes we have different opinions on certain topics, but I think arguing is healthy because it helps me understand others' perspectives and learn new things.

× It was really enjoyable to share my deep thoughts with them and umm accept their opinions and their feelings too.

✓ It is really enjoyable to share my deep thoughts with them and umm accept their opinions and their feelings too.

这里描述的是一种习惯性或经常发生的动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× We usually talk about how we are going lately and what we plan in the future.

✓ We usually talk about how we have been doing lately and what we plan for the future.

“going lately”表达不准确，应该用现在完成时“have been doing”表示最近的状态；“plan in the future”应改为“plan for the future”，介词使用错误。

× We also talked about the problems that we are facing right now and also the happy moments that we have of somewhere we travel to or some from which have connected.

✓ We also talk about the problems that we are facing right now and also the happy moments that we have from somewhere we have traveled to or some places we have connected with.

前半句使用了过去时“talked”，但后面描述的是现在正在发生的事情，应使用一般现在时；另外，句子结构混乱，需调整表达使其更通顺。

× when I chat with a group of people, we have more happy moments in the farm with droves.

✓ when I chat with a group of people, we have more happy moments on the farm with crowds.

“droves”通常指大量动物，不适用于人群，且介词应为“on the farm”而非“in the farm”。

× We usually go deeper into the conversation and it makes both of us get closer to each other.

✓ We usually go deeper into the conversation and it makes both of us get closer to one another.

“each other”和“one another”都可表示相互关系，但在两人以上时用“one another”更合适。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see, uh, the person's, uh, face and their body and how they, uh, express themselves with their own language and with their speaking language at the same time, which help me to understand them better.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see, uh, the person's, uh, face and their body and how they, uh, express themselves with their own language and their spoken language at the same time, which helps me to understand them better.

“speaking language”应改为“spoken language”，且谓语动词“help”应与主语“which”保持单数形式“helps”。

× Yes, sometimes we have different opinions, uh, upon some specific events, but it is OK because arguing can make me understand another person's thinking and uh, I also enrich myself by arguing.

✓ Yes, sometimes we have different opinions, uh, about some specific events, but it is OK because arguing can help me understand another person's thinking and, uh, I also enrich myself by arguing.

“upon”用法不当，应改为“about”；“make me understand”表达不自然，改为“help me understand”更合适。