聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity in some parts. Try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more coherent by using linking words. Also, keep your answer concise and clear within 5 sentences. For example, you can start with a clear topic sentence and then support it with reasons and examples.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, but I prefer talking to them face-to-face rather than online. This is because in-person conversations allow us to express our thoughts more clearly and avoid misunderstandings. Moreover, physical chats bring more joy and help strengthen our relationships.

建议: Your answer covers the topic but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to provide specific examples to enrich your response.

示例: Usually, my friends and I chat about our relationships and sometimes gossip about mutual friends. Besides that, we often discuss plans for trips or having lunch together, which helps us bond and enjoy our time.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding informal fillers like 'uh' and by using linking words to make your points clearer. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and keep sentences concise.

示例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a friend rather than in a group because group conversations can be confusing, and it's hard to follow who is speaking. One-on-one chats allow clearer communication and better understanding between us.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your sentences better and use linking words to show contrast. Also, avoid incomplete sentences.

示例: It depends on the person I want to communicate with. If they are a close friend or family member, I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal. However, if I don't know the person well, I usually use social media or other online platforms.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid filler words. Also, provide specific examples and explain your points logically using linking words.

示例: Sometimes, my friends and I argue, mostly about small things like which test to choose or who to talk to. Although these arguments are silly, they are a normal part of our conversations and help us understand each other better.

× I would mostly prefer chatting with them physically rather than in online.

✓ I would mostly prefer chatting with them physically rather than online.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'online'. The correct usage is simply 'online' without a preposition in this context.

× Physical chatting involves lot.

✓ Physical chatting involves a lot.

The phrase 'a lot' requires the article 'a' before 'lot' to be grammatically correct.

× It brings more joy comparatively to online and we can express our thoughts without miscommunication if it were if it is done and.

✓ It brings more joy compared to online, and we can express our thoughts without miscommunication if it is done face to face.

The phrase 'comparatively to' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'compared to'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and unclear; 'if it were if it is done and' is corrected to 'if it is done face to face' for clarity and correctness.

× It is mainly related to the relationships with uh, he or she is in with other person.

✓ It is mainly related to the relationships he or she is in with other persons.

The phrase 'with uh, he or she is in with other person' is awkward and incorrect. Removing 'with' before 'he or she' and using plural 'persons' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× talk about going to trips and having lunch with each other.

✓ talk about going on trips and having lunch with each other.

The correct preposition with 'going' is 'on trips' not 'to trips'.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend than talking to group of people because uh, talking to group of people makes mess and we can't clearly understand who is talking and who is not.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend rather than talking to a group of people because talking to a group of people creates a mess and we can't clearly understand who is talking and who is not.

The phrase 'than talking to group of people' should be 'rather than talking to a group of people'. Also, 'makes mess' should be 'creates a mess' for correct article and verb usage.

× If it is one to one-on-one chat, then we can clearly express our thoughts and understand each other.

✓ If it is a one-to-one chat, then we can clearly express our thoughts and understand each other.

The phrase 'one to one-on-one chat' is redundant and missing articles. The correct phrase is 'a one-to-one chat'.

× If he or she is a close friend of mine or a family member, then I would definitely prefer to face to face communication if it.

✓ If he or she is a close friend of mine or a family member, then I would definitely prefer face-to-face communication.

The phrase 'prefer to face to face communication' is incorrect. It should be 'prefer face-to-face communication' without 'to' before 'face-to-face'.

× Most of our conversations are about arguing with each other.

✓ Most of our conversations involve arguing with each other.

The phrase 'are about arguing' is awkward. Using 'involve arguing' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× It they are mainly about uh, which test to pick which uh boy to talk.

✓ They are mainly about which test to pick and which boy to talk to.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('It they are mainly about uh'). The corrected sentence removes redundancy and clarifies the meaning.