聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends. Although I don't have many people to share my life news with, I have three or four close friends and my wife with whom I like to share updates.

建议: Your answer lacks fluency and contains some incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear, complete sentences. Also, try to be more specific about the topics you discuss.

示例: Usually, we talk about university life, including lectures and exams, and how challenging studying can be. Additionally, we discuss our jobs, future plans, and career aspirations.

建议: Your answer is brief and somewhat unclear due to word order issues. Try to structure your sentences properly and expand your answer with reasons to make it more effective.

示例: It depends on the situation and my mood. Sometimes I prefer chatting with a group because it's lively, but other times I enjoy one-on-one conversations for deeper connection.

建议: Your answer is good but contains some repetition and incomplete thoughts. Try to avoid repeating phrases and complete your sentences fully. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal and comforting. For instance, on emotional days, I like to meet a friend who can support me and reassure me that everything will be okay.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Work on sentence structure and clarity. Also, explain your opinion more clearly and avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes, and I believe it's normal. Healthy relationships involve different opinions, and I appreciate friends who can offer advice and alternative viewpoints.

× I don't have a lot of people who I who I will share my life news but I have 3 or 4 close friends and I like sharing my news is my wife.

✓ I don't have a lot of people with whom I share my life news, but I have 3 or 4 close friends and I like sharing my news with my wife.

The sentence has a singular and plural issue and incorrect preposition use. 'People who I who I will share' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'people with whom I share'. Also, 'sharing my news is my wife' is incorrect; it should be 'sharing my news with my wife'. Use 'with' to indicate the person you share news with.

× But usually we are talking about university, university lectures, exams. How hard is it to? Study and also we are speaking about job, our future and what we are being.

✓ But usually we talk about university, university lectures, exams, how hard it is to study, and also we speak about jobs, our future, and what we will be.

The original uses present continuous tense ('we are talking', 'we are speaking') where simple present is more appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'how hard is it to? Study' is fragmented and should be 'how hard it is to study'. 'What we are being' is incorrect; it should be 'what we will be' to indicate future aspirations.

× It depends on when, where I am and how is it my mood also, but I prefer both.

✓ It depends on when and where I am and also on my mood, but I prefer both.

The sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions. 'How is it my mood' is incorrect; it should be 'also on my mood'. The phrase 'depends on when, where I am' needs 'and' to connect 'when' and 'where'.

× I prefer to talk with my friend face to face because I feel more comfortable.

✓ I prefer to talk with my friends face to face because I feel more comfortable.

The singular 'my friend' is less natural here when referring generally to friends. Using plural 'my friends' fits better with the context of general preference.

× For example, if I have a very emotional day, I just prefer to see my friend who will, who will support me and tell me that it's OK people have.

✓ For example, if I have a very emotional day, I just prefer to see my friend who will support me and tell me that it's OK to have such feelings.

The sentence is incomplete and has pronoun and sentence structure issues. 'It's OK people have' is incomplete; it should be 'it's OK to have such feelings'. Also, removing the repeated 'who will' improves clarity.

× Mostly yes, I think I think that it's normal. It's a more healthier relationship people.

✓ Mostly yes, I think that it's normal. It's a healthier relationship, I think.

'More healthier' is incorrect because 'healthier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is redundant. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing improves clarity.

× I don't need friends who are accepted all my opinions.

✓ I don't need friends who accept all my opinions.

'Who are accepted all my opinions' is incorrect; the correct form is 'who accept all my opinions' because friends are the subject performing the action.

× I just need people who have other advice, other opinion.

✓ I just need people who have other advice, other opinions.

'Other opinion' should be plural 'other opinions' to agree with 'people' and to indicate multiple differing views.