博物馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your sentences grammatically correct and more natural. For example, say "museums are places that hold many artifacts and record history" instead of "they are the places that so many artifacts and record history". Also, avoid unclear phrases like "It have its own educated obligation". Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I think museums are important because they are places that hold many artifacts and record history. Moreover, they provide us with opportunities to learn from the past and understand different cultures.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words like "because" or "therefore". Also, try to combine sentences to avoid redundancy and make your answer more natural.

示例: My hometown is Malacca, which is a historical heritage city. Therefore, there are many museums located around the heritage sites that display various artifacts.

建议: Avoid asking questions back to the examiner as it is not appropriate in this context. Also, improve grammar by saying "I don't often visit museums" and be more specific about your last visit. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: No, I don't often visit museums. The last time I visited one was last year in Yilan, Taiwan. Although I can't remember the exact exhibits, I enjoyed learning about the local history there.

建议: Improve your grammar by saying "The last time I visited a museum was last year." Also, avoid repeating uncertain information and try to provide more specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: The last time I visited a museum was last year in Yilan, Taiwan. Although I don't remember all the exhibits, I believe the museum focused on the local history of the area.

× Yes, I think museums are important because they are the places that so many artifacts and record history and it is also a place for us to learn from the past.

✓ Yes, I think museums are important because they are the places where so many artifacts are kept and history is recorded, and it is also a place for us to learn from the past.

The original sentence lacks the correct use of 'there are' or 'where' to introduce the clause about artifacts. Also, 'artifacts and record history' is incorrect because 'artifacts' cannot 'record history'; instead, history is recorded. The sentence needs 'where' to connect the clause and proper verb forms to clarify meaning.

× It have its own educated obligation.

✓ It has its own educational obligation.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'educated obligation' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'educational' to describe the obligation.

× No, I don't often visit museum.

✓ No, I don't often visit museums.

The noun 'museum' should be plural 'museums' because the sentence refers to visiting museums in general, not a specific one.

× The last time I visited a museum is at last year.

✓ The last time I visited a museum was last year.

The phrase 'is at last year' is incorrect because 'last year' refers to past time, so the verb should be in past tense 'was' and 'at' is unnecessary.

× It is a museum in Taiwan which is located in Elan, but I can't remember that.

✓ It is a museum in Taiwan which is located in Yilan, but I can't remember that.

The place name 'Elan' is likely a misspelling of 'Yilan'. Also, 'in Elan' is correct preposition usage, but the name should be corrected for accuracy.

× What is this display inside?

✓ What is displayed inside?

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. The correct structure to ask about the contents is 'What is displayed inside?'

× I think it's something about the history in Elan.

✓ I think it's something about the history in Yilan.

Again, 'Elan' should be corrected to 'Yilan' for accuracy. The sentence structure is acceptable otherwise.