图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime seçiminde yanlışlıklar var. "Going off" ve "going to livery" ifadeleri doğal değil. Ayrıca, cümleniz biraz uzun ve karmaşık. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için, geçmişte kütüphaneye sık gittiğinizi ve şu anda sınav hazırlığı nedeniyle gitmediğinizi açık ve net bir şekilde ifade edin.

示例: I used to go to the library very often a couple of months ago. However, I haven't been going recently because I was preparing for my university exam, and now that it's over, I haven't returned yet.

建议: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var, örneğin "I usually studying" yerine "I usually study" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, "sometimes I'm sometimes I study" ifadesi tekrarlı ve doğal değil. Daha akıcı ve doğru bir cevap için, hangi dersleri çalıştığınızı net ve düzgün cümlelerle ifade edin.

示例: I usually study mathematics and history in the library, and sometimes I also study literature.

建议: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. "They get some books" ifadesi anlam açısından belirsiz. Ayrıca, "only going to library" yerine "only go to the library" kullanılmalı. Cümlenizi daha açık ve doğru yapmak için, çocukken kütüphaneye neden gittiğinizi ve şimdi neden gittiğinizi net bir şekilde ifade edin.

示例: When I was a kid, I used to go to the library to borrow books for fun, not for studying. But nowadays, I only go there to study.

建议: Cevabınızda "going to liberty" ifadesi yanlış ve "going to the library" olmalı. Ayrıca, cevabınız biraz dolaylı ve konudan sapmış. Daha doğal ve doğrudan bir cevap için, bilmediğinizi belirtirken daha kısa ve net ifadeler kullanın.

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I don't live in China. However, I know that Turkish kids often go to the library to study and read books.

× A couple of months ago I was going off and I was going to livery very often.

✓ A couple of months ago I was going out and I went to the library very often.

The phrase 'was going off' is incorrect; the correct past tense expression is 'was going out'. Also, 'livery' is a misspelling of 'library'. The verb 'was going' should be replaced with 'went' to correctly express habitual past action.

× But I'm not going these days because I was preparing for university exam and after I finished the exam I'm not going.

✓ But I'm not going these days because I am preparing for the university exam, and after I finish the exam, I won't be going.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Was preparing' should be 'am preparing' to indicate ongoing action. 'After I finished' should be 'after I finish' to maintain future reference. 'I'm not going' should be 'I won't be going' to express future intention.

× I usually studying mathematics and history of course, and sometimes I'm sometimes I study literature too.

✓ I usually study mathematics and history, of course, and sometimes I study literature too.

The verb 'studying' is incorrectly used after 'usually'; the base form 'study' should be used to express habitual action. Also, the phrase 'I'm sometimes I study' is redundant and incorrect; it should be simplified to 'sometimes I study'.

× I used to go to library when I was a kid just because they get some books not for studying.

✓ I used to go to the library when I was a kid just because they had some books, not for studying.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'they get some books' is incorrect; it should be 'they had some books' to correctly refer to past possession.

× But these days I only going to library for studying.

✓ But these days I only go to the library for studying.

The verb 'going' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is 'I only go' to express habitual present action. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Actually, I don't have any thought about Chinese kids, about them going to liberty or not, because I'm not Chinese and I'm not living in China.

✓ Actually, I don't have any thoughts about Chinese kids, about whether they go to the library or not, because I'm not Chinese and I don't live in China.

'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to express general ideas. 'Them going' is incorrect; 'whether they go' is the correct form. 'Liberty' is a misspelling of 'library'. Also, 'I'm not living' is better as 'I don't live' for habitual action.

× I I'm living in Turkey and I only have some thoughts about Turkish kids.

✓ I live in Turkey and I only have some thoughts about Turkish kids.

The phrase 'I'm living' suggests a temporary action; 'I live' is more appropriate for a permanent or habitual state. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error.