图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'by the book here'. Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate on my assignments and read books to expand my knowledge.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít và dùng từ phù hợp như 'books' thay vì 'book'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

示例: Usually, I finish my assignments and read books in the library because it offers a wide range of materials that help me learn more about the subjects I am interested in.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý thì động từ và cấu trúc câu. Tránh dùng 'don't I didn't'. Ngoài ra, câu nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn với liên từ phù hợp.

示例: When I was a child, I didn't go to the library often because it was not very popular in Vietnam a few years ago.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh nói lặp từ, dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'Sorry to gather high mark'.

示例: I'm Vietnamese, so I don't know much about Chinese kids. However, I think they often go to the library because they need to prepare for important exams, and the library helps them improve their knowledge to get good grades.

× I often go to the library because I think that this will be a peaceful place for me to finish my assignment and enrich my knowledge by the book here.

✓ I often go to the library because I think that this will be a peaceful place for me to finish my assignment and enrich my knowledge by reading the books here.

The phrase 'enrich my knowledge by the book here' is incorrect because 'by' should be followed by a verb in the -ing form to indicate the means of enrichment. The correct form is 'by reading the books here.' This clarifies the method of enriching knowledge.

× I usually finish my assignment and read book there because I think that there are various books which can broaden my knowledge about the few that I want to study.

✓ I usually finish my assignments and read books there because I think that there are various books which can broaden my knowledge about the subjects that I want to study.

The word 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the habitual action, and 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple books. Also, 'the few' is unclear; 'the subjects' is more appropriate to specify what is being studied.

× When I was a child, I don't I didn't go to the library so much because it's not popular in Vietnam in a few years ago.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't go to the library much because it wasn't popular in Vietnam a few years ago.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present and past tense ('don't I didn't'). The correct past tense form is 'didn't go.' Also, 'it's not popular' should be 'it wasn't popular' to maintain past tense consistency. 'In a few years ago' is incorrect; it should be 'a few years ago.'

× Because I'm Vietnamese people so I I'm not clear about Chinese kids, but I guess maybe they often go to library because they have to face a lot of important exams.

✓ Because I'm Vietnamese, I'm not clear about Chinese kids, but I guess maybe they often go to the library because they have to face a lot of important exams.

The phrase 'I'm Vietnamese people' is incorrect; 'I'm Vietnamese' is correct because 'people' is plural and does not fit with 'I am.' Also, 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library.'

× So I think this library will help them to enrich them. Sorry to gather high mark.

✓ So I think this library will help them to enrich themselves and achieve high marks.

The phrase 'help them to enrich them' is incorrect because the reflexive pronoun 'themselves' should be used to refer back to the subject 'them.' Also, 'Sorry to gather high mark' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'achieve high marks' to express the intended meaning.