图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'doing homework' nên là 'do homework'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'following the books', thay vào đó nên nói 'borrowing books'.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I need to study and do my homework. I also like borrowing books there since it's cheaper than buying them.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'and and and'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually go to the library to study and read books or stories. Sometimes, I also meet my friends there.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý thì động từ cho phù hợp với quá khứ, ví dụ 'I often went' thay vì 'I often go to went'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và kết thúc câu đúng ngữ pháp.

示例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. My parents took me there on weekends so I could do my homework and read books.

建议: Bạn nên phát âm rõ ràng và tránh lỗi từ như 'tiny kiss' thay vì 'Chinese kids'. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc tốt hơn và sử dụng thì đúng, ví dụ 'do homework' thay vì 'doing homework'.

示例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they plan to study and do their homework. Also, it's a quiet place which helps them concentrate.

× Yet I often go to the library, it's required to study and doing homework, and I also like following the books there because it's cheaper than buying them.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it's required to study and do homework, and I also like borrowing books there because it's cheaper than buying them.

The modal verb 'it's required' is used incorrectly; 'because' is a better conjunction here. 'Doing' should be 'do' to match the verb form after 'to'. 'Following the books' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'borrowing books'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yet I often go to the library, it's required to study and doing homework, and I also like following the books there because it's cheaper than buying them.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it's required to study and do homework, and I also like borrowing books there because it's cheaper than buying them.

After 'to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'doing' should be 'do'. Also, 'following' is incorrect in this context; 'borrowing' is the correct verb form.

× Yet I often go to the library, it's required to study and doing homework, and I also like following the books there because it's cheaper than buying them.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because it's required to study and do homework, and I also like borrowing books there because it's cheaper than buying them.

The phrase 'following the books' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'borrowing' when referring to taking books temporarily from the library.

× I go to the library for study, study for reading the book or read some stories and and and to meet my friend. My friend.

✓ I go to the library to study, read books or stories, and to meet my friend.

The phrase 'for study' should be 'to study' to indicate purpose. 'Study for reading the book' is incorrect; it should be 'read books or stories'. Repetition and extra words are removed for clarity.

× Yes, I often go to went to the library when I was a kid. My parents took me there at the weekend. I I'm going there to do my homework, to read the book to.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. My parents took me there on the weekend. I went there to do my homework and to read books too.

The phrase 'go to went to' is incorrect; 'went' is the past tense and should be used alone. 'I'm going' should be 'I went' to maintain past tense consistency. 'To read the book to' is corrected to 'to read books too' for clarity and correctness.

× My parents took me there at the weekend.

✓ My parents took me there on the weekend.

The correct preposition for days or periods like 'weekend' is 'on', not 'at'.

× I go to the library for study, study for reading the book or read some stories and and and to meet my friend. My friend.

✓ I go to the library to study, read books or stories, and to meet my friend.

'The book' should be plural 'books' to match the general activity of reading multiple books or stories.

× Yes, tiny kiss often go to the library because they would plan to study and doing homework. Umm, it's a quiet place.

✓ Yes, tiny kids often go to the library because they plan to study and do homework. Umm, it's a quiet place.

'Tiny kiss' is a typo and should be 'tiny kids'. 'Would plan' is incorrect here; simple present 'plan' is appropriate. 'Doing homework' should be 'do homework' to match verb form after 'to'.

× Yes, tiny kiss often go to the library because they would plan to study and doing homework. Umm, it's a quiet place.

✓ Yes, tiny kids often go to the library because they plan to study and do homework. Umm, it's a quiet place.

After 'to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'doing' should be 'do'.