图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrases like 'degenerate it' and 'concentrate myself'. Try to use more natural expressions and be concise. For example, say 'I often go to the library because I find it easier to focus there than at home.'

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I find it easier to concentrate there than when I'm at home, where I tend to get distracted.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and is unclear. Use correct tenses and clearer sentences. Also, add linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I often practice coding and English in the library because after quitting my job, I need to prepare for my next career.'

示例: I often practice coding and English in the library because, after quitting my job, I need to prepare for my next career opportunity.

建议: Your answer has tense inconsistency and redundancy. Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating 'because'. For example, 'I rarely went to the library as a child because my parents were concerned about germs there.'

示例: I rarely went to the library when I was a child because my parents were worried about germs and viruses there.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Avoid repeating words and complete your sentences. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, 'In my opinion, Chinese kids don't often go to the library because they prefer staying at home playing video games or watching series instead of studying.'

示例: In my opinion, Chinese kids don't often go to the library because they prefer staying at home playing video games or watching TV series rather than studying.

× Yes, I go to the library frequently because when I am at home I will like a couch potato and degenerate it.

✓ Yes, I go to the library frequently because when I am at home I tend to be a couch potato and degenerate.

The use of 'will' in this context is incorrect for expressing habitual behaviour or tendency. 'Will' is often used for future actions or willingness, but here 'tend to' better expresses habitual behaviour. Also, 'degenerate it' is incorrect; 'degenerate' is intransitive here, so 'degenerate' alone is correct.

× So I want to concentrate myself.

✓ So I want to concentrate.

The verb 'concentrate' is intransitive and does not take a reflexive pronoun. Saying 'concentrate myself' is incorrect; the correct form is simply 'concentrate'.

× I will go to the library.

✓ I go to the library.

Using 'will' here is unnecessary as the sentence expresses a habitual action rather than a future intention. The simple present tense 'I go' is appropriate for habitual actions.

× I off I often practice coding and English.

✓ I often practice coding and English.

The phrase 'I off' is incorrect and unnecessary. Removing 'off' corrects the sentence structure and makes the sentence clear.

× After I quitting my job, I have to prepare the next one for my for my life.

✓ After quitting my job, I have to prepare for the next one in my life.

The phrase 'After I quitting' is incorrect; it should be 'After quitting' using the gerund form. Also, 'prepare the next one for my for my life' is awkward; 'prepare for the next one in my life' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Actually, I rarely go to the library when I was a kid because my parents didn't bring us to there because there are too many bacteria and viruses there.

✓ Actually, I rarely went to the library when I was a kid because my parents didn't bring us there as there were too many bacteria and viruses.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'bring us to there' is incorrect; 'bring us there' is correct. 'There are' should be 'there were' to maintain past tense consistency.

× From my point of view, it's not really often because people people are. People are likely to stay at home and play video games or watching series rather than studying.

✓ From my point of view, it doesn't happen very often because people are likely to stay at home and play video games or watch series rather than study.

The phrase 'it's not really often' is awkward; 'it doesn't happen very often' is clearer. 'People people are.' is a repetition and incomplete sentence, so it is removed. 'Watching series' should be 'watch series' to maintain parallel verb forms. 'Rather than studying' should be 'rather than study' to keep parallel structure.