图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some confusing phrases like 'Epson phone' and 'newspaper dear'. To improve, try to use clear and relevant vocabulary, avoid redundancy, and keep your sentences concise and natural. For example, directly state why you go to the library and what you do there, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I sometimes visit the library when I have free time. I usually go there to read interesting books and newspapers. This way, I can enjoy reading without having to buy newspapers myself.

建议: Your answer covers the main points but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms, avoid repetition, and organise your ideas logically with linking words. Also, be more specific about your activities in the library.

示例: Usually, I read books in the library, sometimes with my friends, family, or child. I always keep quiet to respect others. Besides reading, I occasionally borrow books to take home.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. To improve, try to organise your thoughts before speaking, use simple and clear sentences, and avoid unnecessary fillers. Directly answer the question and provide a reason or example.

示例: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library at school because there wasn't one. However, I tried to visit other libraries nearby whenever I could.

建议: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and lacks clarity. To improve, directly answer the question, avoid irrelevant personal information, and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to provide specific information or examples if possible.

示例: I'm not Chinese, so I can't say for sure. However, from what I've read in newspapers and seen on social media, many Chinese children often visit libraries to read books, encouraged by their parents.

× I go to the library to Epson phone to take interesting book stories, newspapers.

✓ I go to the library to use the phone to take interesting book stories and newspapers.

The original sentence contains unclear wording and incorrect verb usage. 'Epson phone' seems to be a mistake; it should be 'use the phone'. Also, 'take' is acceptable here but the sentence structure is awkward. Correcting to 'use the phone to take interesting book stories and newspapers' clarifies the meaning and uses the verb correctly.

× I go to the library to Epson phone to take interesting book stories, newspapers.

✓ I go to the library to use the phone to take interesting books, stories, and newspapers.

The phrase 'interesting book stories' is incorrect because 'book stories' is not a standard plural noun phrase. It should be separated into 'books' and 'stories' as plural nouns. This correction clarifies the items taken from the library.

× Also I can get a newspaper dear, so I don't need to buy the newspaper, so I go to the library.

✓ Also, I can get a newspaper there, so I don't need to buy the newspaper; that's why I go to the library.

The word 'dear' is a misused pronoun or typo; it should be 'there' to indicate location. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× In the library I usually read books and not only that I reads with my friends, family and my child.

✓ In the library, I usually read books and not only that, I read with my friends, family, and my child.

The verb 'reads' is incorrectly used with the first person singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'read' without 's' for first person singular.

× In spite of reading book, I would not make any noise during that time.

✓ In spite of reading books, I would not make any noise during that time.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, not a single book.

× So obvious answer is I only use library to read books.

✓ So, the obvious answer is that I only use the library to read books.

The sentence lacks articles and conjunctions, making it awkward. Adding 'the' before 'obvious answer' and 'library', and 'that' to introduce the clause improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes I take the books from the library.

✓ Sometimes I borrow books from the library.

The phrase 'take the books' is not idiomatic in this context. 'Borrow books' is the correct collocation when referring to getting books from a library temporarily.

× In Kate, I didn't go to the library because in my school there is no library in my school.

✓ As a kid, I didn't go to the library because there was no library in my school.

'In Kate' is a mishearing or typo for 'As a kid'. Also, the tense should be past ('was') to match the past time frame. The repetition 'in my school' is redundant and removed.

× I don't know why. What in I I am from the I'm in the school, there is no library, so I didn't go to the school.

✓ I don't know why. When I was in school, there was no library, so I didn't go to the library.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing to 'When I was in school' and correcting 'didn't go to the school' to 'didn't go to the library' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× What? I always try to go to the library in other places as well.

✓ However, I always tried to go to the library in other places as well.

'What?' is inappropriate here. The sentence should use past tense 'tried' to match the past context and 'However' to connect the idea logically.

× I'm not a Chinese, I'm Nepalese and so I don't know they are going to the library or not,

✓ I'm not Chinese; I'm Nepalese, so I don't know whether they go to the library or not,

'A Chinese' is incorrect; 'Chinese' is used without an article. Also, 'whether they go' is the correct form to express uncertainty.

× but in the newspaper like news and the social media platform, I see they often go to the library to read books and so on.

✓ but in newspapers and on social media platforms, I see they often go to the library to read books and so on.

'In the newspaper like news' is awkward; 'in newspapers' is correct. Also, 'on social media platforms' is the correct prepositional phrase. The rest is acceptable present tense.

× Obviously mother and father of the Chinese people.

✓ Obviously, the mothers and fathers of Chinese people encourage this.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding a verb and pluralizing 'mother' and 'father' makes the sentence complete and meaningful.