图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ваш ответ звучит естественно, но есть некоторые грамматические ошибки и избыточность. Например, "I discover a new books" должно быть "I discover new books". Также можно сделать ответ более связным, используя связующие слова и избегая повторов.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading. I usually find new books there, which makes my visits very interesting and enjoyable.

建议: Ответ хороший, но есть небольшие ошибки в грамматике и стилистике, например, "getting lost" лучше заменить на "to get lost". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

示例: I really enjoy the quiet and calm atmosphere in libraries because it helps me focus. Therefore, I usually study, read new articles and books, and sometimes do my work there.

建议: Ответ содержит незавершённое предложение "My mom." и немного неорганизован. Рекомендуется строить предложения более связно и избегать повторов, например, "Moreover" и "also" вместе.

示例: Yes, I used to visit libraries when I was a child because my mom encouraged me to read. She helped me develop a strong love for books and often involved me in reading activities.

建议: В ответе есть ошибки и неясности, например, "when I was in Chinese" должно быть "when I was in China". Также фраза "a lot of a great deal of" избыточна. Следует использовать более точные выражения и связующие слова.

示例: I think it depends on the educational culture and parental influence. However, when I was in China, I noticed many libraries were crowded with children.

× I discover a new books in the Public Library and I find it interesting for me.

✓ I discover new books in the Public Library and I find them interesting.

The phrase 'a new books' incorrectly combines the singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'books'. The correct form is either 'a new book' (singular) or 'new books' (plural) without 'a'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to the plural 'books'.

× I'm obsessed with this quiet and calm atmosphere in the libraries that allows me to be focused and getting lost in books without any distractions.

✓ I'm obsessed with this quiet and calm atmosphere in the libraries that allows me to be focused and to get lost in books without any distractions.

After 'allows me to be focused', the verb 'getting' should be in the infinitive form 'to get' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form after 'allows me to'.

× I prefer to study, read some new articles and also some books and work of course.

✓ I prefer to study, read some new articles and also some books, and work, of course.

The sentence is mostly correct, but adding commas improves clarity. No singular/plural error here, so no correction needed for that. (No correction needed for singular/plural here, so this suggestion is omitted.)

× My mom. Moreover, my mom cultivated this fond love for reading, and she also forced me to engage in some activities.

✓ Moreover, my mom cultivated this fond love for reading, and she also forced me to engage in some activities.

The fragment 'My mom.' is a sentence without a verb and is incomplete. It should be removed or connected properly to the following sentence to form a complete sentence.

× I suppose it depends on their educational culture and moreover parental influence, but when I was in Chinese I noticed a lot of a great deal of libraries that were jam packed with children.

✓ I suppose it depends on their educational culture and, moreover, parental influence, but when I was in China I noticed a great deal of libraries that were jam packed with children.

The phrase 'a lot of a great deal of libraries' is redundant and incorrect. Use either 'a lot of' or 'a great deal of' but not both. Also, 'in Chinese' should be 'in China' to refer to the country.